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One Last Gasp
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Winter died - one brief heavy burst and that was it. A light dusting here, areas to the north got up to nine inches of snow! Figures - we get gypped, again. :(


Poem Artwork

Rain beginning to
change to bursts of snow,
even as I write -
Winter refuses
to let go without
one.  Last.  Gasp:  three to
five, depending on
where you are and which
way the low pressure
system goes.  Could be
more, or less.  Falling
so hard, it's slapping
against the windows -
huge flakes mixed with sleet/
mixed with rain, with an
occasional flash
of lightning and low
rumble of thunder -
Guess Winter forgot
it's supposed to be
Spring in a few weeks ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (3/6)

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 Reviews of "One Last Gasp"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
I truly believe you would do well in the weather forecasting business. You tell it like it is, and humor, a wonderful mix. Yep, spring is on its way.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Yes it did Karla, and what would we do without
snow, lightning and thunder ;)

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Beautiful job Karen. Spring is coming, I think you're calling it and it is responding. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Either that or the ground hog was mad at someone!Loved this Karla, feel like I live by you cause we are having the same problem here in northern Illinois!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Old Man Winter, like many of us is gettin mighty old. His memory's probably shot. And I was gonna say somethin else, but I forgot what!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Liking wet snow? shovelling wet snow a pleasure? I thing D'Artagnan is shoveling something else your way! ! ! ha ha ha ha ha
We haven't got winter yet, maybe Jack Frost don't like Sweden.

Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
I just love to see snow
Of cause only in picture and the news cast
I gave up snow 4 years ago
Thank you Karla
Oh by the way
I saw my first Robin ever here,
at my son's house in the Catskill mountains
In the winter I used to wake up to see about a dozen
feeding on the fruits of a cherry tree in front of the house;

Love & Peace be with you
William

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Forgive me, but it was one hell of a day. Lights flickering on and off, winds rattling my windows and 6 to 7 inches of snow and for a backdrop rain, sleet, thunder, lightning, enough already.... However, on the lighter side I finally got to use my snow shovel, tee-hee....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on March 6, 2008
very nice poetic weather report Karen, yes spring is on its way

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Well, well, my dear friend, how many times have you asked for snow? So now you know, the Universe does listen and will give you what you want, not necessarily when you want it..lol, be sure to beware of what you ask for, you will get it...
Great poem,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
This winter has been like a bad weed... you can yank in any direction-- pull it out by the root, dump a gallon of herbicide on it, or a teapot full of boiling water, and it just won't die. It looks like it sometimes, but then a few days later, there's another nasty tendril (of weather) poking his tongue out at us... Die, you winter. Die! Die!!! --Charlie (says as she stares out her back window at the still 2 ft of crusted snow there) Die you punk. Die! Die!!!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
...you will find spring in your step shortly Karla...
John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
And now I KNOW that you sent this system up our way to ruin our Saturday...how rude...;) e

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
winter will hang on but Spring will force it to loose its hold

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
I think if we all step outside and blow hard enough into one direction, we could get rid of it.
:-)
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
yes indeed. i can finally taste the budding of spring and wish for snow no more.

always,
randy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Yea here too and I sure wish someone would remind it...isn't that your job Karla? lol

Fee

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Lovely photo to go go with a beautiful poem!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
When that storm is through in your part of the world, it will be here tomorrow afternoon...yikes!!
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
With any luck Spring will take firm hold very soon...

I love the line in this poem "one. Last. Gasp." Great imagery it created...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
and I thought I had trouble with
wind, rain and tree branches
blowing against the windows....

Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Slapping against the windows...I vaguely remember that sound...would love to hear it again. One woman's waste is another woman's treasure, Karla, but this poem is all treasure!

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Nice imagery of winter...Would love to have some of that snow!!!

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
And its coming our way, too! Very well expressed. Rebecca

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Karla, this picture captures your words exactly and paints a more detailed picture of the moment. This has lots of good images, sounds, and a sense of feelings in this poem. I liked it a lot.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Winter needs a shove!!! Cheers

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Yeah, we have to go through hell . . .

Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Winter: acting like a stubborn child--acting like...ME! LOL Too bad it waited until the beginning of spring to make her appearance!! Better late than never...LOL Excellent; very well penned and illustrated! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Bring. on. the. SNOW!!!!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Winter's memory seems to be akin to mine... I have a complete whiteout of cognition a LOT of the time! :)) Winter, like me, needs a bit of dosing up with copious amounts of VitD. Hopefully, your weather poetry will make that ol winter shape up a bit and scuttle off, back to the North Pole... A nice bit of slappin here! K xx


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