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Fragile
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Won't be around the next couple of days as bad weather in the forecast - keep us in your prayers. :(

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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Thunder cracks open
clouds on the edge of the sky -
nerves shatter like eggs

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (4/8)

 


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 Reviews of "Fragile"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 10, 2008
Tether your bravery strongly. It will be tested. Peace be with you. And God's blessings upon you. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on April 10, 2008
This is a really great haiku Karla - very sorry i missed it, hope your nerves are recovering and things are peaceful now, hugs, Nicky xx

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Just hold tight! Someone's watching.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
...be safe Karla....
John

Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Karla That is One Amazing Photograph You Have There!!
Frightening Yet Mesmerizing
Goodness Darlin How Did You Face Your Day Seeing A Tornado?
I take it that did turn into a tornado?
Hope Your Safe
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
That pic says it all, Karla.

Reviewed by Samuel Stone
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Well done...
Wishing you well..
Sam

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Perfect little gem!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Stay safe Karla!

Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Karla your in my prayers, you will get through the fury of the storm
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
A very ominous poem. Stay safe:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
You and Karen [along with your neighbors] are in my prayers. Send us some of that rain. Already, there is concern for fires in New Mexico. Maybe we'll get some ... soon.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
My prayers are always with you. Rebecca

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Excellent ku and pic, Karla. I have you in prayr and strongly pray this weather pattern will soon be gone and a less severe kind of rain etc that's needed will replace it. Take care!
Love,
ET

Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Good poem and a wonderful pic that matches the words and correctly passes the message. Your brother and friend Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Stay safe...love the imagery in this one!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Great poem Karla,, Stay safe!!!!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Know the feeling! Stay safe and know you are always in my thoughts and prayers...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Stay safe Karla and we will keep you in our prayers.

Newfie Hugs & Prayers are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Enjoy your days off...stay safe.
peace, love and light, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Hope that rain is of omelets.
Take care.

Georg

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
This is a superb Haiku, Karla-- another brilliant idea. --Charlie

Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Stay safe and remember "My Daily Prayer"... < < < <hugs>>>AND LOVE. Mikii

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
I love the metaphor here as the skies seem like eggs cracking open sometimes when that first crack and flash of thunder hits. Enjoy your days off.

fee

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Remember your poem of yesterday and you will be safe. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Yours too... I am glad I don't live in Texas with all the storms. Be safe.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Yikes, God be with you... BTW we have snow. Maybe it'll last till Christmas..lol

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Keep the Faith; and Stay Safe.

Reviewed on April 8, 2008
I hear ya: when that thunder rolls, I turn chicken! Living in Texas does NOT help!! I am glad we can hang onto one another when svr wx comes calling! Very well penned account of your StormFear in few lines; but says volumes!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (chicken-hearted) twink, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
be safe!


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