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Medic!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Inspired by Walt Hardester. Thank YOU.

God bless those who have saved more lives than have been lost.


Poem Artwork

Eyes rolled back, seeing nothing
but blue skies and an angel?  in
the distance.  Not time for you yet;
the long slide back into the caring
arms of a Medic determined not to
let you go.  Funny:  he and God got
the same eyes.  And what the --
when did He start wearing camo?

You think you hear voices on the
double blades of a dustoff.  They'll
not let you go without a fight.  The
battle, theirs.  You've earned your
rest.  They're on point.  Needlestick.
Pain dims into memory.  No need to
worry with these two at your side -
Medic and God, they've got your back.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (4/12)

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Medic!"
Reviewed by Branch Isole (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2008
One of your best Karla. Complete, every line filling as a part of the whole.

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
Amen- I work in a hospital as a secretary and yes, God and Medic are your two best friends when you really need them. Very well written...

*** God Bless ****
Lavendar Jazz

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
Well done Karla. Poignant write for sure. LOL and peace be be always with you. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
Nicely done, my dear friend. We need to talk, and soon.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
Touching write Karla...well done.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
...expressive and beautiful write...one finds himself in the arms of a savior.
very well written Karla...
John

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Wow, Karla! This poem, along with Walt's, needs to showcase together in publication. Very excellent, both in content and in expression. This level of writing is the best of the best. Write on!

Ted

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
wonderful--such a deeply felt write!

Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Simply beautiful... brings tears to they eyes... with those two backing you, what more do you need... Very inspiring... thank you! Blessings, Janice

Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Great write, my uncle was a vietnam vet, and I know the struggles he deals with to this day
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
GREAT! A heart wrenching example of man , the saver and God, the saviour....M

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
You've exemplified the fine line between life and death in your poem and the wonderful sense of peace as one gives himself over to the powerful life support of a "Medic". Good job.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
I swear I was a soldier in a former life as your words took me back into a moment of total darkness that was broken by a bright star-like light and the words of those around me scurrying to save my life. How brave are the soldiers who go forward knowing that this may very well be their fate. Excellent images, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
beautiful and touching. Powerful Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
This is a beautiful touching write

Your support and awareness of

What the soldiers go through shine through the page

Brilliant write!!

Peace Love And Light...Morning star

Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Great appreciation, in heartbeat cadence, beautiful Karla!
Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Karla, this is beautifully written and your service shows through your understanding of what the soldier feels! Superb poem!...ET

Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Wonderful write, Karla; God bless those who put their lives at risk to save injured or dying soldiers or civilians! BRAVA, very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Oh Karla so touching and so true. Beautiful touching write. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Another good write Karla. Keep it up friend.


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