Revealed (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

A thought provoking write...
Cryssa

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

yep, you nailed it here poetically Karla, Gustav, what a name for a storm and some humans are like your say, destructive

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

I have enjoyed the reading of "Revealed" for its imagery and contents.

In respect,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

-- thank goodness they are mindless natural occurrences -- unlike some humans with devious natures and ill intentions -- another very interesting poem Storyspinner -- Stay safe -- JMW

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Mother Nature is not always kind... lindalaw

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

At least hurricanes are random, driven by the wind currents, and relieve tropical heat that would cook us all.

The sky just changed, the wind has picked up, and it's started to rain. Gustav has arrived in Houston, expected to stay a few days.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

A write to definately jog the conscience and make one think.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Karla that is a powerful message, perhaps you are right, but with the Saving Grace of Christ, that monster of hate is taken out of us
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Karla, but there's still hope. Be safe out there. Good luck. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Powerful message here, Karla! Thought provoking and so true! Very well penned/imaged; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Very well said Karla. Stay safe in the upcoming days ahead and keep us posted. God bless.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

As was said, your words packed a punch here. An excellent write. Stay safe. Rebecca

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Boy you went for the thoat in this one. Don't give up on us Karla, even though we have all that anger, we also have a great deal of love. I love you my friend. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

excellent piece and comparison
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

Wow! This one packed a punch that makes one stop and take a closer look at self...well done my friend...hope all is well and that you and Karen stay safe through these trying times! Praying for you both and all the others too!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 31, 2008

I'd like to think that not all of us are "killers to the core", though we all could well be, depending on the situation...be safe the next few days dear friend...Ed & rufuz