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YIke!: Ragged Edge of Nervousness
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Probably be the last you see of Karen and me this weekend, due to Hurricane (Y)Ike! Tropical force winds; heavy rain; maybe a rogue tornado (PRAY NOT!!) or two due in by morning, continuing all through Saturday and into Sunday morning.

Soooo glad I'm not on the coast.

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman


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(Y)Ike!:  Ragged Edge of Nervousness

...on his way, Hurricane Ike.  His
edge peeks over the horizon,
bringing fear along with those who
have left in advance of the storm.

More expected.  Already pounding
the coast with wave and wind ...
Galveston.  Water over the seawall,
exploding high into the air.  Oh,

Galveston!  We're too far inland to
feel the surge, but our own in the
forecast:  up to eight inches of wet;
flash flood watches in anticipation.

Wind:  hurricane force as close as
one county south; tropical, here
and elsewhere.  800 miles a c r o s s.
Lot of storm before it's done:  pray.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (9/12)

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 Reviews of "YIke!: Ragged Edge of Nervousness"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Strong as the subject matter this one captures the soul of the storm and presents it as a painting masterpiece to your readers.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 13, 2008
mortal fear is not a pretty experience -- I hope and pray that the two of you are safe and well -- God bless -- JMW

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 13, 2008
Ike is a true monster; be safe, you Texas Twinks.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
A great job capturing the anxious feeling you have before a storm. Good luck and stay safe.
Sheila

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Hang tough! My thoughts are with you. Rebecca

Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Karla I am praying for you
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Well, if you were on the coast, you wouldn't be there long, you'd be blown inland...I was watching the weather channel and the guys standing out in it, they look as if they are going to blow away themselves...tie yourselves together and enjoy the big blow...it is Mom Nature at her bestest...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Be safe. Take nothing for granted, just BE SAFE! ~ Sara

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Hang in there, girls!
Love and prayers from our way.
Becca~

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
I would feel a lot better if you and Karen were outta that area tonight. This one will take about six hours for the main wind part to blow through. It is (as I write) 11:19 PM here in New Boston. My hotel is full of Ike refugees. The surge part is due to hit Galveston Bay around 2 AM. Our refugees will be up all night watching the CNN Ike coverage. I have CNN-audio playing through my laptop, and it sounds ugly already. My prayers are wrapped all around Karen and you.

Ted

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Hang in there my friend; it'll be over before you know it. My prayers are with you and Karen. God bless.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
lots of prayers and love are being sent to you two along with prayers. Stay safe...Love you both, OH whopper of a poem by the way. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
be safe-my thought go out to those on the coast--looks rough

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
- stay safe you, love, Nicky xx

Reviewed on September 12, 2008
I will pray, believe you me!! I pray we get through this in one piece; my FIRST hurricane!! WHEEE!! (Sounds like a barrel of fun--NOT!! LOL) Very well penned; fears/concern very well eveident in taut words! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Glad we are together during this hurricane time! YIKES! (No, IKE!! LOL)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
I've been watching the coverage and praying You and Karen are in a safe place, this looks like it will be horrific,mainly because of the oceans surge, which is very deceptive and can become like a tsunami right before our eyes. I pray God intervenes to weaken it. Please stay in out harms way. My thoughts and prayers are with you!
Seeing the ocean I love so much, bearing down with such force across 6oo miles gives me the shivers!
Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Shall keep you in my prayers. Your brother abdi/noor


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