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Who Is The Enemy: They or I?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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'Nuff said. :(


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Your hatred of me runs down my
cheek, slime hawked along with
a name:  babykiller.

Your protest of me runs hot in my
veins, anger thrown like bombs
designed to maim and kill.

And yet it is perfectly acceptable
for the enemy to use their own as
incendiary devices:

And yet it is perfectly acceptable
for our men to be charged with
crimes against humanity:

the double standard must stop.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (11/1)

 


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 Reviews of "Who Is The Enemy: They or I?"
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 15, 2008
It is morals which sets us apart. Well said my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
Wise words Karla..........M

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
well said, Karla ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
I agree. No military deployment except if we are threatened by military force.

Ron

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
Here, here.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
This very powerfully done lovely friend and so true~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
Can somebody explain a few snipers commanded by Executive Orders to kill a few individuals that were forbidden to be killed by Executive Orders?

Georg


Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
"the double standard" begins with each excuse for making "thou shalt not kill" an expedient law to break, and that excuse is (almost) always made by a leader. I know many people who did volunteer to join the military, and they all had their reasons. But I do not know anyone who volunteered to go kill people. They went to Vietnam, went to Iraq, because they were ordered to go. They went, they fought, some died, all were afraid, and we owe them so much.

Ted

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
Thank you for sharing and yes I hope everyone gives the thanks to a veteran today and everyday possible. Thank you Karen.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
Have you thanked a veteran lately? I hope many will, especially this coming Veterans Day.

Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Karla
You are a hero in my eyes for the service of our country, I am blessed to call you friend
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
This is what many of us feel about how war has sent our young men and women into places to do inhumane things in the name of God and Country...and then be tried for crimes.... When the enemy uses their own...children, women, and others as weapons who go up in flames and destroy our precious troops.... This meant alot to me... and I can see from reading below that the poem evokes many different interpretations. Hugs and keep crankin these out... lindalaw

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
You could be no one's enemy Karla for you have so much love and understanding in your heart. Let no man accuse you of anything else. Your poem was wise and true and once again showed your humanity. Peace and love to you my friend. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
well said!

Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Dear Karla,

Poétesse poétique pure avec magnificence - brillant mon ami!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Rules of engagement suck for our troops.
Nuff said.

~W~

Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Karla~

Someething doesn't compute when the enemy gets away with murder while OUR soldiers are the ones being charged! Powerfully penned heartbreak~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Amen!

Rebecca

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Although I still believe Vietnam war was a mistake or perhaps not engaged properly, I had nothing but utmost respect for the soldiers, sailors and airmen who followed orders blindly in the believe that they fought for their country.
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Amen! It makes me sick to see how even good people with fine minds friends and family too, can be so wrong about how they condemn our country while giving the terrorists a pass. Have you seen the UTube soldier and what he had to say. go take a look,it's getting millions of hits. Well done Karla!

love,
Eileen

Reviewed on November 1, 2008
Wars are wars, and wars are hell no matter who kills who.
I'm sorry you are saddened by the wars. Some veterans will be emotionally affected for life!

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed on November 1, 2008

~ The ENEMIES are the industrialists of wars: The five permanent members of the United Nations Security Council; the Lords of corruption and global slavery and social unrest.

Good call to ring the bells of Justice... "Who Is The Enemy: They or I?" strikes fairness.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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