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Grand Conjunction
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... three worlds, clustered in
the Southern  sky:  slender
moon, bright Venus, Jupiter.
Gathered below are fools,
staring in awe at the Heavens:

the Grand Conjunction is at
hand.  And there I am, the
one with the crick in the neck,
in their midst:  join us?  Don't
leave us out here by ourselves!

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (12/1)

 


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 Reviews of "Grand Conjunction"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 4, 2008
and a Grand Conjunction it was, Venus and Jupiter, low in the southwest sky, just beneath a beautiful crescent moon -- a breathtaking experience for we earthbound fools -- peace and love to you my friend Karla -- JMW

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on December 3, 2008
hee, hee... Wonderful poem.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 3, 2008
Beautifully captured, Karla!

Reviewed by Erin Glasse (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2008
I saw it, after I thought I'd missed it!

The same day I saw a hawk eat a little bird and that was just as cool.

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on December 2, 2008
Neat--I was out looking too--but guess what? I could never get the moon into the picture. Sort of a twilight zone moment, so thanks for the lovely commemoration of a beautiful bit of celestial acrobatics.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 2, 2008
The star gazers are the ones who look to the heavens...the dreamers are those who travel to the stars, the poets (like you) are the ones who capture the stars and bring them to earth...

hugs
fee

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
AN EXCELLENT WRITE
and photo fot its accompany
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
...I will be watching...great write Karla...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
i have done my share of staring! the sight is lovely!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
I'll be watching right along with you Karla.

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Without sounding like a broken record...your words have such a poignant way of reaching into the readers mind... wonderful writing. lindalaw

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Me thinks watching from the windows will suffice until it hurts to keep looking up at the dark, clouded heavens. Beauty in the making...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
You capture in your words what so many fail to see on a clear night.
Count me among the awe-struck fools, -gene,

Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Fantastic write Karla. BRAVO!!!!!!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Very moving Karla, blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Karla,

You always write the most poetic poetry!!!
I absolutely love this!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Hello Karla,

You have taken us to a new world, a realm if you will with your writings - SUPERB!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
As I look into the heavens tonight...I will think of my twins looking up also. Enjoy the view!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
It was maybe two in the morning. We were camped high in the Sierras for a week near seven lakes. A deer licking the side of my tent woke me and then nature called. Once out among the shadows of the old growth trees, the sky took my breath, my heart and soul as I stood there oblivious to the cold and any crick in my neck staring at heaven above. That's the memory our poem brought to the surface. City living with all those lights leaves a lot to be desired.

Reviewed on December 1, 2008
You are a fantastic nature lover, dear karla. thanks for this beautiful poem

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Too cloudy arond here, but many years at sea and a with a small telescope, I have look at the skies in awe at all it had to offer, night after night, never the same, never repeating, infinite.

Georg


Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
You're not alone! Last night the sky was purely clear in SoCal and these celestial bodies moved upon me with great might. It truly is beautiful, like signs in the heavens of something wonderful that is approaching.
Blessings to you friend ...
richard

Reviewed on December 1, 2008
That was a neat experience: seing something that's rare. And we get to do it again tonight! WHEE! Don't you just love skywatching?? I sure do! LOL Very well penned, Karla, and love the piccy of the moon!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Very magical and mystical write my friend, totally enjoyed. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Such peace to this Karla,,very good!

Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Love the mystical yet earthy quality Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Gathered below are fools,
staring in awe at the Heavens

And such fools so many of us are, who unlike you, never gaze in awe at any of the wonders all around us.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
love it - excellent Karla xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Sound like a marvelous joing of forces to me, Karla, I'll just wait and let you tell me about the spectacle . . . You do it so well . . .


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