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Rats
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I AM FINE. This just came to me, and so, I write.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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You string words on poetry's kite
and I watch them soar into higher
numbers and book deals.

Mine get eaten by Charlie Brown's
tree and spit out with an editorial
comment:  not good enough.

What's worse is that they asked
for "five cents, please," payable
upon receipt.  *s i g h*

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (2/8)


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 Reviews of "Rats"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
hee, hee... It isn't funny...but it is... hee, hee... only because I feel that way sometimes, and you brought out the humor in it. Thanks for making me smile!
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Excellent piece Karla
Just keep writing
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
Oh, I hear this one, loud and clear! You just have to believe in yourself and never give up. This is something I remind myself of continuously!! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on February 11, 2009
OW! I've never tried to publish poetry. Attempting to publish novels is sufficient misery, a genuine exercise in masochism. This will sound like sour grapes, but I'm really beginning to believe it's true. If you can't append MFA to the end of you name--you've already been disqualified by the MFA who is reading your query. You are so good, though, I really can't understand it.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on February 9, 2009
five cents?

I have to tell you, I am so envious of all the people who manage to collect their poems and put them in book form. I wouldn't know where to begin with my stuff. I can only imagine how hard it must be to assemble a book. Even if a publisher doesn't pick it up, you should be proud knowing you completed the work of creating a collection. ~ sara

Reviewed on February 9, 2009
Karla
I believe one day, you will get that book deal, or I am going to have to slap some editor upside the head LOL, they are blind if they dont see their talent, a great write of frustration and a great picture
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on February 9, 2009
Who do you know that's getting book deals recently? I'd like to know.
Excellent analogy to the C.B. imagery that we all know. (I always loved Shultz's ideas) And that "sigh" at the end... From your frustration you carve out many little gems...
Next time, michael

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on February 9, 2009
It's like they say, Karla: "Life isn't fair."

My personal lament is that some years ago I filed an income tax return and checked the box to donate $1.00 to the presidential election fund. Turns out I didn't owe one dime of tax that year. So what did IRS do? Through the mail, I received 17 pages of regulations amid their demand for the $1.00 I owed for the contribution or they would attach liens to everything I owed.
Needless to say, I don't mark that "Donate" box anymore.

Life is just full of lessons. The trick is surviving.

Enjoyed your viewpoint with "Rats."

Richard

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 9, 2009
Like Sisyphus pushing that stone uphill we need to have patience and go slowly to reach the top, if we go too fast we will no be able to brake and the top will go by so fast that we will falling down much faster.

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 9, 2009
The way it goes so much of the time...excellent write, Karla.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Oh, that's tough. Heartfelt, hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
I have heard this far too often over the past while Karla, "NOT GOOD ENOUGH". Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Expressive write about the way things often seem, especially in the publishing field.
Fee

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Karla, your writings are so good. I agree with Karen- you are a winner!Just for being who you are.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Well done Karla.

Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Karla~

Don't EVEN compare yourself to Charlie Brown: you're a WINNER in my eyes; those who don't read or leave comments on your poems are the REAL losers! LOL Well, not LOSERS, but they're the ones missing out on some wonderful poetry/photography! THAT'S what I meant to say! :) ANYway, this is an excellent pen, and that piccy is beautiful! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
eXCELLENT! and you are always right on... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Top notch no matter where from whense it came...Great write...love, Bonnie

Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Karla~!

Knock-down perfect . . . you continue to amaze!!


LOve and Hugs,

Lance


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