Jerry Bolton's 'Nameless Girl' in part inspired these lines - you naughty boy. =]
Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman
... wind blowing so hard, it
flips up the flirt of sky,
exposing her dirty
side. Look - no underwear:
just an invitation
for a little wild sex
before she calls your name
for the last time. She's got
your number, believe me:
but what a way to go. =]
Karla, you conjured up this little twister of sexy humor like the true StormSpinner of poetry you really are -- gotta love it -- peace and love my friend --Jon Michael
Now who's naughty, Karla? lol! Nice to see this side to your writing. Different and FuN. We don't get to see your flirty/sensual side nearly enough:)
Sheila
...WHAT A WAY TO GO...TO WHERE? GOTCHA! MADE YOU LOOK...(SMILE)
THIS IS A GREAT WRITE...GOOD IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND
BLESSINGS. JOYCE* HIS INSPIRATIONS
Karla getting Saucy eh...
Go Stormspinner..
;) Chezza
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
" She's got
your number," You said a mouthful there Karla, especially since Cassondrah (her real name) has been controlling Joe for decades without his knowning it
No wonder they call you the StormSpinner: everywhere you go, you leave your mark! LOL (And not debris, either! LOL) Delightful write; well penned/imaged! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn the Reluctant Chase Partner. :D
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You've bounced right back...and how well, you naughty thing1 Love this!
John
Cheers,
Dan
of storm spinning. -gene.
THIS IS A GREAT WRITE...GOOD IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND
BLESSINGS. JOYCE* HIS INSPIRATIONS
Go Stormspinner..
;) Chezza
your number," You said a mouthful there Karla, especially since Cassondrah (her real name) has been controlling Joe for decades without his knowning it
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn the Reluctant Chase Partner. :D
Really funny! (but so unKarla like)
Mary