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Acrostic: Truckle (For Cryssa C)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Truckle?!? You've GOT to be kidding! But, dedicated employee I am, I'll burn the midnight oil to meet deadline. =]

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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TRUCKLE, verb:  to yield slavishly to the will of another; submit.

I owe, I owe,
It's off to work I go ...

Toiling under pressure, pick up pen, put it down, pick it up while words
Roll by faster than Lucy and Ethel's chocolates.  Brain melts, but hands
Unconsciously work to meet deadline:  will be dead if the poem is not
Consigned by morning's light.  Would like to ship it to Idaho where the
Keeper of the challenge comes from.  No.  I love my job, I love my job, I
Love my job.  Dedicated.  Willing to work long hours.  I am the best
Employee she has.  Wonder if I'll finally get the raise she promised me?

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman  (10/2)

 


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 Reviews of "Acrostic: Truckle (For Cryssa C)"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 9, 2009
Being a trucker is not an easy life, but then neither are many other jobs. Many are thankless jobs, but we all do what we have to, huh?

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on October 6, 2009
I had a friend who told me once, he was quitting his job because it was interfering with his hobbies
The real funny part was he did, no more truckling for him
Enjoyed the write
Have a great day
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on October 5, 2009
You know me..."truckle" is one I too will add to my list! I know this feeling all too well! It seems like that last empire, but, we all know what happened to them! Truckle on and our rewards will be many! This I know! :)
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on October 5, 2009
Karla, well done. Just added your new word to my list of unique words to use to confuse people who think they're smart. Cute write, but knowing your employer's penchant for low pay--long hours--and no appreciation, I think I'd start looking for a better job.

If you have to truckle, you should get paid well for it.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 4, 2009
I hope you get the raise. Nice write.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 4, 2009
Excellent acrostic, a raise would be better. Patrick

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 4, 2009
Great word and kind of goes with the trucker's/truckess's slavish submission to deadlines and clocks somehow. Like both your pace and energy in this short-form, Karla. Reminds me of that 70s/80s song "Convoy"! The pressure's mountin... xx

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on October 4, 2009
Clever writing, Karla. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
WELL DONE AND FUN....ENJOYED THE ACROSTIC MESSAGE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Very unique Karla! and yes you will get the raise, for your hard work and dedication will sure bring big dividends! You will see it!
Excellently written in such a creative way, I enjoyed reading each line, very real!

P.S. Thanks to you and Karen for lifting me up in prayer, your prayers are answered, I am feeling better and the burn is healing. May the Lord always bless you and meet all of your needs!

Love And Prayers
Always!!
Inspire

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Very creative verse, Karla...really enjoyed!
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Clever Karla does it again! It's obvious you love your work,
as you are loved. -gene.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Nice Karla!
Don't count on the raise though!
rlc

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Super job Karla creative write!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
very well done!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
well, you certainly have raised out spirits ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Wow - Keep On Truckling!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Love the new word you taught me and in such a delightful way. Well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Going all the way up on first gear...will get you there!

Georg


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Very well done, Karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Nobody meets a challenge like you do, Karla!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 2, 2009
you are showing your full talents with these brilliant responses to challenges Karla! Well done!

Reviewed on October 2, 2009
This is great Karla, loved this one, keep them coming
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2009
Forget the job...just write, write, write. It's the stuff of divine inspiration.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on October 2, 2009
FAB-YOU-LOUS-!! Very, very clever, Luv. Made it look like a snap, but it must have taken a lot of time and work to create this doozie.
LOVE IT!!! Chose a fun way to illustrate, t'top it all. Proud t'know you, now give us another, sweethot. Love & Kisses, Pea ....PS: Once was lucky enough to work with a little character at a developmental center who called me "sweethot." Therapy goal was
for him to say "Throw the ball to me." When he said, "Throw me the ball, sweethot," I couldn't help but laugh. Just encouraged him.:) I have had the most wonderful friends!! You, f'rinstance.:) Keep yer
powder dry, sweethot. Wuvoo!! Pen Pikkerupper

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on October 2, 2009
You have me laughing... I disagree with Jerry. You are CERTAINLY quite appreciated by me! hee, hee... I wish I could give you that raise!
I guess I now just await your next challenge for me.

By the way, a little bit of trivia for you... I learned this word by reading Farmer Boy by Laura Ingalls Wilder. (I homeschool some of my children and we read it for Lit. class.)

Cryssa

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on October 2, 2009
Great poem Karla!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed on October 2, 2009
Excellent poem, Karla; you've met and exceeded Cryssa's challenge, both in verse and image! Very well penned/illustrated; brava! You get a raise from me! A BIG one! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2009
I doubt the raise is forthcoming, but maybe you should look around for a better employer, I feel you may not be appreciated as much as you deserve. Good writing, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 2, 2009
Nice one, Karla, nice one!

John


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