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Last Gasp
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Heat bubbling up from below
catches that emanating
from the sun's surface and bursts
into flame under my feet ---

burning like embers stirred by
my passing, they set the ground
ablaze with one last gasp of
color, these stubborn Autumn

leaves.  Nearly Winter and they
refuse to die quietly:
how they glow.  Perhaps they think
I will not remember them ---

why they ignite like lightning,
showering my eyes with reds
and oranges and yellows:
they make it hard to forget.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (12/14)


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 Reviews of "Last Gasp"
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
Beautiful Karla I see you grow with each poem you write, thank you for allowing us the privillege of seeing that
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
beautiful parallel to life!

Reviewed on December 15, 2010
Karla,

Beautiful write about Autumn's exit. But are you really looking forward to the snow? Merry Christmas

Mary

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
Great write Karla as we just pulled through one of the worst wind storms in Nova Scotia. No snow in sight, hope Santa has wheels on his sleigh.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
Indeed, they do, although up here, they are now long gone, replaced by howling arctic winds, sub zero wind chills, and snow, snow, snow.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on December 15, 2010
There's more depth to this, unsaid.
Indeed, great descriptions special K xx

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 14, 2010
No more leaves here, other than the piles of dead ones blowing in the wind though its not yet winter, we have the COLD of it early...e

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on December 14, 2010
Colorfully described with flowing words from the beauty of your flowing, so to speak, pen.
Mark

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 14, 2010
Wonderful write, Karla.

Reviewed on December 14, 2010
Wonderful write, Karla; well done, and I love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 14, 2010
And YOU, dear Karla, you and your lovely pen,
make it hard to forget. -gene.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2010
poetess, master of the small moments. perfect poetry once ahain.


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