collapse!
this game on the 'net
just maybe...perhaps...
i *will* beat it yet...
collapse!
gotta play again!!
my mind, it kidnaps...
gotta play, often--
collapse!
that dang stupid game!!
it's fried my synapse--
i'm goin' insane!!!!!!!
collapse!
i can't get enough--
aw, man...awww, craps!!
it's beatin' me up--
collapse!
gettin' pretty good
as time has elapsed
watch out, neighborhood!!!
collapse!
as time has gone by
i ain't no dumb ass
through this game i FLY!!!
collapse!
what's yer highest score?
don't wanna brag...*snaps*
i'm the champ--and more!!!!
collapse!
now there's a contest
wanna play fer cash?
ya know i'm the best--
collapse!
keep up the brave front
(he'll bust yer kneecaps)
WHO'S a little runt???
collapse!
ya talkin' ta me?
all game playin' chaps
i'm gonna win, see--
collapse!
*crud* i'm outta here
my GAME just collapsed...
need practice, i fear!!!!!
collapse!!
my stupidity
suffered a relapse
ain't it a pity!!!!!
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there's this game, see..."collapse"...on yahoo games? can't seem to get enough of it...when i'm not workin' , or writin' on the den, or checkin' my e-mail, or catchin' up on the latest news, i'm playin' that dang stupid game...i'm hooked!!...can't seem to get past level nine...heelllpppp...
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Reviews of "collapse! (fiction)"
Reviewed by coni lea harris (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2003
you did your best, that's all that counts,,
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2003
I've never heard of collapse before, but know how games can capture. Good write on this subject, Karla!
Funny write here karla, don't know much about the game, okay I dont know anything about the game not really into video games but this was a hyseterical write!
~Michelle~
great write Karla...games can really captivate;-)!
Reviewed by William M. Sowman
Reviewed on January 8, 2003
Karla loved this. Funny how a game can get hold of you like this. When I was around twelve, it was the pin ball machines. they used to pay of in cash momey, so naturally I had to figure out a way to cheat. Used to lift the machine and put it on the toes of my shoes to slow the ball. Won enough for milk shakes and stuff. Bill Murray ((hugs))
you're better at it than me! i can't get past level 6! hysterical write, karla; thanks so much for sharing! love, your twink, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) HELP!!!! :o
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~Michelle~
good write---
--john+