it was a dark and stormy night... (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Such a vivid write! Powerful!

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

I could almost feel the storm myself. Very well done. Love. S

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Power write many visions came through this

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Nature can be rather feisty, eh? Good poem...brought back the awe :)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on May 26, 2003

Powerful write...fantastic images.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 26, 2003

very powerful imagery!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 26, 2003

Outstanding Karla...

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 26, 2003

You've captured their power! Great!

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on May 26, 2003

Fantastic write...great imagery...loved it
Jenni

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2003

Yes Karla, I was in the middle trembling with you. You are brave, but not I. Great story and great writer. Hugs and love. Bill

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Little lady, fine work. Stay safe.

Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

And the lamb watches over his flock in safety..

Love you,
Dove

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

you take care of yourself you hear???

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

I have a brother-in-law who has the same condition as you. Don't take offence, but I tell him he doesn't say his prayers right.
Stay safe karla......your friend Ron

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Oh, my, yes, storms are frightening, and yet so beautiful at the same time. I love watching them from my window and listening to them from my bed. I am shaken by this power of life!

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Oh man...I ran into such storms on my recent trip to Ohio. Having lived for five years now in the anemic weather of SoCal., I was stunned by the robustness of the storms back home. Excellent job here!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Excellent metaphor Karla, I know your fear of storms, Hang in there with a prayer;-)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Storms were meant to keep the prairie open and free of trees. Buildings now suffer the storms' wrath.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Oh this one is chilling excellent imagery
Peg

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Scary! Stay safe Karla, excellent imagery here!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Nice imagery.

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Great imagery here karla. Please be safe
love Chrissie xx

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

I liked it. Vividly captivating. But we've had enough rain over here on the east coast, so don't send it this way.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

When nature gets to cleaning it sure can be a spooky thing! Great write.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Stay safe, my dear friend. {{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Oh I hope not.
Wonderful imagery. Stay safe. Under the bed is still a good place. I used to sit in a closet when I was a kid, with a flashlight and a good book. [smiles]

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

wow! startling imagery in this intense write; made me feel as though i were right in the middle of the storm (YIKES! :0)!! incredible write; and well done, karla! :) (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn.