she has one
moment to
impress the
audience
waiting to
see her grand
debut--she
is a new
star in the
celestial
play; darkness
hides her; the
music builds,
leading up
to her cue--
you're on!--and
lightning makes
her nervous,
flickering
entrance; she
leaps from
one end of
the stage to
the other;
back again;
another
pass she makes,
dancing as
she's been taught,
against the
backdrop of
deepest black
she leaps--and
applause shakes
the skies--God
thunders His
approval.
(c) karla dorman, 2003
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i was inspired to write this today as
a round of thunderstorms--the first in
almost a month and a half!--passed
through the area.
the lightning was vivid and intense,
but o, so beautiful.
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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
What a wonderful piece. I could see clearly the dancer upon the stage and the second in the sky from your own comment.
~Jackie~
this is awesome, karla; the imagery is incredible, and the last verse caught my attention! wonderful write! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :(
We're getting that line of storms now, I think. I posted "Your Footsteps" today at AD but I will be taking some time away to recover now, but I'll be back. You stay inspired, okay?
Jill :)
~Jackie~
Oh this was great...
I love watching thunder storms...
How is Karen doing?
Love & Hugs to you both...
Trixie :)
I was dancing all the way with you!!
I did a "Lighting dance in ballet once...and that was fun!! you took me right back to the good old "Younger" days..
Hope it will cool down soon!!
i am freezing up as i speak!!
love Tinka
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
(((((((((((Karla)))))))))))
Jill :)
TRASK
This is an awesome poem ... thank you!
~Joseph
Striking piece!
Wow!!!!
best wishes always
from
kay