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lightning's dance
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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she has one
moment to
impress the
audience
waiting to
see her grand
debut--she
is a new
star in the
celestial
play; darkness
hides her; the
music builds,
leading up
to her cue--
you're on!--and
lightning makes
her nervous,
flickering
entrance; she
leaps from
one end of
the stage to
the other;
back again;
another
pass she makes,
dancing as
she's been taught,
against the
backdrop of
deepest black
she leaps--and
applause shakes
the skies--God
thunders His
approval.

(c) karla dorman, 2003
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i was inspired to write this today as
a round of thunderstorms--the first in
almost a month and a half!--passed
through the area.

the lightning was vivid and intense,
but o, so beautiful.


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 Reviews of "lightning's dance"
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
What a wonderful piece. I could see clearly the dancer upon the stage and the second in the sky from your own comment.
~Jackie~

Reviewed on August 10, 2003
this is awesome, karla; the imagery is incredible, and the last verse caught my attention! wonderful write! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
you have captured lighting's dance well in poem as a ballerina's dance captures her audience

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Hi Karla,
Oh this was great...
I love watching thunder storms...

How is Karen doing?

Love & Hugs to you both...

Trixie :)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Fantastic imagery in this wonderful write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Lovely vivid images Karla!!
I was dancing all the way with you!!

I did a "Lighting dance in ballet once...and that was fun!! you took me right back to the good old "Younger" days..

Hope it will cool down soon!!

i am freezing up as i speak!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Fantastic!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
You captured the moment beautifully Karla!

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Wow!!!!!! This was simply amazing awesome piece!!!!! Love the wordings you've used.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Nicely done, sweetie. 114 here today. 116 tomorrow. [smiles] I would LOVE a little rain.

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
I am awestruck, dear friend! This is marvelous.
(((((((((((Karla)))))))))))

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
We're getting that line of storms now, I think. I posted "Your Footsteps" today at AD but I will be taking some time away to recover now, but I'll be back. You stay inspired, okay?
Jill :)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Most Interestingly So Good!

TRASK

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Karla,

This is an awesome poem ... thank you!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Lovely, vivid images, Karla! Keep your head down! :)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Beautiful words and the imagery is fantastic. You lived around here you'd get to write those things every single day. LOL

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Wow Karla....I am really impressed with this one.
Striking piece!
Wow!!!!
best wishes always
from
kay


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