Life ends for one African animal, but sustains the life of another.
Cheetah, staring at the horizon, spies movement in the not too far-off distance. She captures, fixates the object of her curiosity on her retinas; missing nothing, the cheetah's amber eyes.
The cheetah is hungry. It has been two days since she has eaten. She concentrates, knowing that she must dine today if she is to survive. If she doesn't, this will be death for this cheetah with amber eyes.
Slowly, she draws closer, closer, ever closer; and her muscles tremble under her spotted hide, in anticipation of the chase. A herd of Thompson's gazelle are focused in the gaze of amber eyes.
Seeking out the merest hint of moisture, craving relief from a dry, parched throat, one foolishly wanders away from the herd; unaware that its fatal mistake may feed the cheetah staring with amber eyes.
The chase is on; dodging this way and that, the gazelle tries to outmaneuver the predator, but it is too late: with a trip, the gazelle falls...and it will become a meal for the cheetah with amber eyes.
The cheetah is exhausted, but happy; she will live another day. She rests, then rapidly consumes her prey; she washes the bloodstains from her spotted fur, then naps, this contented cheetah with amber eyes.
(C) Karla Dorman, 2002/revised, 2003.
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Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Excellant vivid imagery provided Karla, this truly is a magnificent write!
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~Nikki~
Karla, you have so much knowledge regarding Africa, its people's and its animals...and you write so clearly and cleanly about both...More, I want, no need to see more! Thanks for another beautiful write, Peace, ED
What a beautiful, image-filled glimpse into the daily life that is of the cheetah; I could see the drama unfolding as I read this poem! Wonderful job; BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D You are in my prayers too; you always are!~ May things start looking up for you SOON! :(
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~Nikki~
Carmen
This is amazingly well written girl!!
Love FROM AFRICA>>>> Tinka
God Bless
~Michelle~
and all of its creatures. Excellent write ! Thank you
for sharing.
What a beautiful, image-filled glimpse into the daily life that is of the cheetah; I could see the drama unfolding as I read this poem! Wonderful job; BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D You are in my prayers too; you always are!~ May things start looking up for you SOON! :(
Love
Chrissie xx