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Amber Eyes
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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Life ends for one African animal, but sustains the life of another.

Cheetah, staring at the horizon, spies
movement in the not too far-off distance.
She captures, fixates the object of her
curiosity on her retinas;
missing nothing, the cheetah's amber eyes.

The cheetah is hungry.  It has been two
days since she has eaten.  She concentrates,
knowing that she must dine today if she
is to survive.  If she doesn't, this will
be death for this cheetah with amber eyes.

Slowly, she draws closer, closer, ever
closer;  and her muscles tremble under
her spotted hide, in anticipation
of the chase.  A herd of Thompson's gazelle
are focused in the gaze of amber eyes.

Seeking out the merest hint of moisture,
craving relief from a dry, parched throat, one
foolishly wanders away from the herd;
unaware that its fatal mistake may
feed the cheetah staring with amber eyes.

The chase is on; dodging this way and that,
the gazelle tries to outmaneuver the
predator, but it is too late:  with a
trip, the gazelle falls...and it will become
a meal for the cheetah with amber eyes.

The cheetah is exhausted, but happy;
she will live another day.  She rests, then
rapidly consumes her prey; she washes
the bloodstains from her spotted fur, then naps,
this contented cheetah with amber eyes.

(C) Karla Dorman, 2002/revised, 2003.


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 Reviews of "Amber Eyes"
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Excellant vivid imagery provided Karla, this truly is a magnificent write!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Brava Karla! Excellent poem!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Bravo, Karla -- very well done!

Carmen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
I knew you could do this Karla!!

This is amazingly well written girl!!

Love FROM AFRICA>>>> Tinka

Reviewed on October 14, 2003
This was very well done, I enjoyed reading this...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Victoria Noxon
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
A wonderful revealing poem about the true side of nature,
and all of its creatures. Excellent write ! Thank you
for sharing.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Karla, you have so much knowledge regarding Africa, its people's and its animals...and you write so clearly and cleanly about both...More, I want, no need to see more! Thanks for another beautiful write, Peace, ED

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Karla, You've captured the Cheeta's relentless quest--the next kill. Fortunately, there is time to rest until the hyenas steal her kill.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Karla,,,this is awesome! Loved every word of this. Wonderful visions and storyline. Lisa

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Good hunting poem! :-)

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
And thus, the cycle of life in Nature continues. Excellent capture of this!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
An outstanding poem, Karla! And sadly all too true concerning Nature's more violent side.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Karla...wow...such imagery...wonderful work here...enjoyed it so much..Hope you are doing better sweetie....floria

Reviewed on October 14, 2003
(((KARLA)))

What a beautiful, image-filled glimpse into the daily life that is of the cheetah; I could see the drama unfolding as I read this poem! Wonderful job; BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D You are in my prayers too; you always are!~ May things start looking up for you SOON! :(

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
An excellent descriptive poem, Karla...wonderful images
Love
Chrissie xx


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