funnel (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Karla you are so very creative...what a wonderful write....I hate tornadoes...we get them once in awhile...thanks Karla for all the kind words to me on my pages...great poem here...floria

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Which Eye would you like me to look into, they were a bit wild.

"Damn it was perfect till the last two lines",
"And behold the eye of the storm", is this what is termed eye rime.

lovely shape.
Oirdheirc Mor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Great vivid write Karla!!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Those funnels are very destructive
Neat form and poem...

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

I like the shape of your poem.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Wow great write...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

deep within the vortex of your thoughts, the monster is very powerful...

great write...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

A-u-n-t-i-e E-m!!!!

I've been in many a vortex but respectfully they weren't tornaadic...just human conditions of conditioning in one way or the other. I love this poem of yours and the art that gave it depth.it spins!

love,
Susan

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Fantastic tornado write! I could feel the power within it!

Reviewed by Jack . (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

OOPPPSSSS

"Tornado"....lol

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Hi Karla,
Such a chilling write...
Thank God you're alright.
So unique how you wrote
this in a form of a tornato...

Love & Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

great tornados it's a tornado, very creative Karla, an interest to read. hugs g

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Karla, Wow, that is just too, too violent, and fun to read, thanks, hon, Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Wow, Karla! I, too, am picking up my jaw! I caught myself holding my breath as I read this, and I read it without pausing one time... Whew! Reading this made me relive all those horrible moments that I didn't think I'd live again.... gosh... smiles... I don't miss them, that's for sure.... stay strong, hugs coming your way....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

We have them in kansas too my friend LOL not just in oz. this is good lood like one in form..

Taylor

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Karla! I'm here with my jaw in my lap;-) What a fantastic poem, and the form, you not only outdid yourself, methinks you got taken up to the heavenlies for inspiration;-) Be sure to repost this for the contest. This is a winner!Fantastic internal rhyme!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

Well, BLOW ME AWAY!
What a great job!
Superb write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

(((Karla)))

"It's a TWISTER,
It's a TWISTER!" said the Scarecrow from "The Wizard of OZ"! LOL

WONDERFUL, outstanding form and write; this one literally BLEW me away! WOW, what a GREAT job you did; BRAVA! Thoroughly enjoyed this tempest-filled write! Felt the breeze blowin' as I read this tornado warning..ah, er, WRITE! SORry! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 17, 2003

You've whirled me away with this one! Toto, we're not in Kansas anymore! Great write, Karla. Love that form, too.