Thunderstorms frighten me, but they
are beautiful sources of inspiration.
Two giant cumulonimbus clouds circle each other warily. They are the powerhouses, the strongest, most evenly matched of the wrestlers.
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They test each other, with lightning-quick feints; lean into each other, vying for advantage. They meet head-on in a collision that is seen and heard.
~~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~~
Each impact is outlined in scarlet red in the darkening skies; each fall registers on the Richter scale; gusts of wind are purged from the burdened mat.
~~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~~
Their perspiration falls as rain; shouts thunder from the battling contestants. Neither wants to concede. Suddenly, one hits the mat--the storm is over.
(C) Copy written, 2003; Revised, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviews of "wrestling a thunderstorm (revised, repost)"
Karla,This is a great one, whenever one reads it!I love your
concept and the way you delivered it.With a great one two punch!
Knockout!!!;-)
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
I remember this one from before
so I guess that is a good thing because
it was so good before to remain in memory
and now it is even more precise and powerful
This reminds me of a WWF match; could just picture the storm fightin' it out in the ring! wow, what imagery; AWESOME poem! You are gettting better and better all the time; it's gettin' harder to figure out just what you may pull out of your magical pen next...truly enjoyed this "stormy" write!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
What a beautiful concept and expression of it, Karla. Excellent write!
Now my experience is that both Tstorms would collaborate and pound the daylights out of me instead of each other! LOL
Best regards and hugs, doggone it!
Leland
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
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concept and the way you delivered it.With a great one two punch!
Knockout!!!;-)
so I guess that is a good thing because
it was so good before to remain in memory
and now it is even more precise and powerful
It gives it so much more power....punch.....Whooma!!
Love Tinka
(((Karla)))
This reminds me of a WWF match; could just picture the storm fightin' it out in the ring! wow, what imagery; AWESOME poem! You are gettting better and better all the time; it's gettin' harder to figure out just what you may pull out of your magical pen next...truly enjoyed this "stormy" write!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
Now my experience is that both Tstorms would collaborate and pound the daylights out of me instead of each other! LOL
Best regards and hugs, doggone it!
Leland