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Shoot First
by stan n nassano → (All Poetry by stan n nassano)
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Shoot First



So your name

May have been, put upon a list

War is hell

Shoot first

We will worry about hell

When you get home

If that makes you a war criminal

Shoot first

I do not care

You will be alive

You have a right to live

Not be a sacrificial dove

Shoot first

F*** them local warlords

Who feel they may have been dishonored

When the rules of war

Rules of engagement keep shifting

Like the blowing desert sands

Shoot first

When the enemy is now your

Friend

When the feeling in your gut

Sends your instinct raging

Shoot first

Do you remember long ago

We walked in the woods and a deer jumped across our trail

Time seemed to slow down to

A crawl

If you get that feeling, we talked about

Shoot first

In this war of

Road bombs and snipers

An enemy unseen

I doubt your get the chance, to

Shoot first



08-02-07 Snassano


 


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 Reviews of "Shoot First"
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Excellent write stan

Walt

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Great writing,Hugssssssssss

Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Stan,

Trouble is, when we shoot first, we're charged with murder. The enemy uses his own women, children, handicapped as shields, and we're charged? Something wrong, here...but not in your poem. This one hits like a bullet between the eyes: nice shot.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Shoot first
When the enemy is now your
Friend
When the feeling in your gut
Sends your instinct raging
Shoot first ------- Wow! That got me off guard, this was intense!
and then the mention of the poor deer (with a beating heart, is all I kept thinking of) and the females who give birth!
This poem is gem to savor and treasure Stan!
You speak the truth!
Hang IN!
AS we pray for your son and your heart to be STRONG!

sTay Positive!
sTAy STrong!
sTay SAFE1
Namaste!
WE Pray!
Today and Everyday! I know many who pray!
Many hugs and Much love, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox



Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Aint it the truth! well said.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Emotional and impactive write...may your son and all the other sons and daughters come home safely and now.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
egads. .. a powerful write; and so immediate. . with my daddy having been through Vietnam and my brother in Iraq now.....*tears. . .almost frightening to feel this much intensity from a damns all perspective.. . .life is so precious and... i am at a loss for any worthy comments to this except its so real, so now. .. . so dire and i want them all safe first and then home. . .. the rest---as you said "to hell". ..
just gritty
so many tears and fears
and prayers to your family~
.ness.

Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Stan I never had either son go to war but I did have a husband who went and war is truly hell. Strong write, deeply emotive. Will be praying for your son.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Oh Angel Daddy! I feel the fear and pain that inspired this lovin write! Yore precious Baby Boy is in harm's way and you know there is nothin you can do to protect him, nothin but pray fur his safety. I shall join you in prayer and hope others do the same. HUGS! SC


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