Something simplistic about it and the repetition make me think that perhaps you've tapped into the actual mind of a deer. Eerily real/surreal. Grand writing!
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Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Excellent write Dale.....Love the way you led each word into the next....ty, Dani
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