there's no peace to be found
there's no answer on the ground
only disrupted traction
the poorly altered silence of interaction
take my ambition
there's no condition
just my transition
and what's left here
soon to disappear
my instinctive vacancy
fed by love's hypocrasy
there's no hope for sensation
only the stench of debilitation
remaining inert in this situation
I can no longer remain the depreciation
of all that's moral and habitual
of all that's lovely and continual
nothing is sacred nothing is new
nothing is unbroken nothing...
...sensation, debilitation, situation, deprecation.... You could make a fortune writing rap lyrics. Seriously though, I think the repeated use of that syllable really work well in the context in that it builds tension towards the end of the poem.
I'll agree with the others but had to say it made me think of the old song with the line 'I just dropped in to see what condition my condition was in' :) Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2002
I could hardly read fast enough to read this. I felt more of a coffee house kind of thing...but I sure like it.
Sharon
There is something sacred ourselves!. There is nothing new under the sun. Well I like the poem get rid of that existential angst. Remember don't search for meaning! search for experience of life. Allain
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
Rovella is a beautiful woman with a cold heart whom blames herself for an unfortunate old family secret that is literally ruining her life. This secret impedes a gorgeous woman from having happiness in her childhood, and throughout her life. Dark sec
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