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The Fickle Ocean
by Mary E Lacey Desertrat → (All Poetry by Mary E Lacey Desertrat)
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This is about how the ocean can give some much joy, and fear at the same time.

 

                                              
The mighty ocean waves roll toward the beach than pull back
As if she’s changing her mind. She goes out again, her white
foam rising against a clear blue sky. A fine mist sweeps over the
craggy rocks, the oceans roars once more.
 
In the distance, a surfer plays with the water and is trying to win,
But he is a pawn in a larger game, the emerald ocean just laughs at him.
His board crashes, he is underneath the waves, but he is persistent,
And will try and try again. 
 
Sometimes she is a docile thing, with her waves lapping gently on the sandy beach. Other times, not so much, for her temper is a mighty one. Like an unruly child, a tantrum she has, throwing everything out of her way, she’ll knock everything down, wiping out what is in her path.
 
Partners now with an unyielding wind; joining the ocean in all
its wrath.  They wreak havoc on an unknowing town, spewing their venom all around. And in the wake of the morn, people will cry at what is gone.
 
The ocean is a fickle thing, walking peacefully along the sandy beach,
How can it give so much joy, then show its other side, with so much hate.
 


 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Fickle Ocean"
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Mary,

Thanks very much for your recent review . . .

And another finely written poetic treasure - well done!!


Best wishes,

Lance

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 29, 2008
A wonderful piece. It makes one wonder. Only God knows!

Peace be with you.

Giovanni

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
I love the ocean most when camping out on the beach and waking up to bright sunlight.

You write beautiful mood pieces.

Hank Lefevre
author of "A Spoonful of Humor"

Reviewed on September 25, 2008
I never saw the waves and the ocean being that way. I only see its beauty, and its struggle for ever reaching the shore and never giving up its goal.

I guess we both see different version of the waves and the ocean. I remember I when I first begin writing poetry, I wrote a poem about a tiny drop of water, how it went through life becoming larger and larger each time, and finally joining the ocean where it cradles all ships, fish, and all kinds of sea animals that it gives to survive. Then when the sun comes smiling down at the ocean, droplet of water begins to rise to the sky, and hence begins its journey again to become larger and larger. It is a way to life.

Guess we see the ocean and the waves at a different angle.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
Mother Ocean is, indeed, many things. I've seen both sides of her, and I often wonder these days when her anger rises, if she isn't trying to tell us something.

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
Nice flow, be safe and take care :)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
Bringing the sea to life in such a crescendo is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful, always stay in touch with nature she sure is a wonder...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
Mary, you capture the many moods and possibilities of the ocean well and the effects it has on all of us. Great points of view.
John

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
I never thought of it as being fickle but it truly is. I just think of it peacefully, but then I never experienced the other side of it and the dangerous side. Even on a cruise in the ocean no fear for me. No storms were there that year or week and I always found comfort being near the ocean.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
Beautiful writing sweet lady...be well and always safe...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
You have nicely personified the ocean and revealed its personality, Mary. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
"How can it give so much joy, then show its other side, with so much hate."

Like most women, you called it, She's fickle...ed

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
Boy Mary you made this totally come alive from the first stanza to the last. Well done by showing both sides, it is magnificant but can change her mind at any moment and turn violent. Beautiful paintin of your ocean. Love, Bonnie


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