Shameless (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Lori...your direction is right one...as Ophra would say...you go girl...Fletcher B

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

Go for it girl! You knock 'em down
one by one! I agree with Kate Burnside, soul-purging write that does
NOT need to be redone or a revision says
Mountain Poet! Excellent!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 8, 2004

This is a wonderful soul-purging and skin-shedding write, Lori! Nothing but strength and growth can come out of it - life-affirming and control-taking! Great! KB

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

This is a magnificent piece, Lori!
Beautifully expressed, wonderfully penned!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

our destiny is not written in stone, it is in a state of flux ... what we put into it, god will deliver ....

luv the zeal inthis poem!

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

And you want to revise this? Forgive me, but I don't see how you can make it better.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Sounds deliciously rebellious. (hints of Sinatra?) It's a fine affirmation of the Self, which, after all, will travel, transform, and mature.

(I get to say that, at my age. smiles)
Gina

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Shameless Is Man/Woman Without No Conscience_

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

excellent........

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Wow before I tried writting, a mastwerpiece at a sprogb of a write, stunning nothing but stunning

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

a lovely thoughts and write
excellent

William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Wonderful Lori...thougts are well expressed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Love the thoughts you have expressed :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Great poem Lori! the bane of humanity is
trying to manipulate gods plan;-) I know
you know, it can't be done!Though the
deceiver makes us think it can!

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Woo Hoo! You do it!!!

Great write, pulled me in right at the end!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

OH YES!!
You shine and rise in this one Lori.
"Shameless, brazen, unabashed
Yes, yes, yes, I say
I’ll manipulate god’s righteous plan
and do it all my way! "

Peg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

you GO, gurl! i LOVE it!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

I was just logging off when I saw your name
pop up here Lori....why a rewrite?
I think this poem says so very much..
and it is well written in your usual
style....I love it...It shows a strong
person here...floria

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

(((lori)))

Go for it--your way!

enjoyed--(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

powerful and motivational! :)