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Six Haiku
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A diverse mixture of Haiku...

Roses solitude
Hearts blossom in tragedy
Beauty reigns in pain

Lyrics speak softly
Sands fold beneath unsure feet
Both carry me home

Clouds promise nothing
Rivers reach beyond humble tears
My heart is secure

Dreams betray my heart
Death delivers her promise
Graves open slowly

Catch my honeyed lips
Burn my heart with salted love
Games are left to die

Lies are often sweet
Such sweetness cuts deep within
Bitterness serves me

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 Reviews of "Six Haiku"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
Very evocative, Lori; all speaking to me of the "moth to a candle flame"-thing; like the colourful medieval practice of blood-letting, bittersweet! Hugely enjoyed, KB

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
"Rivers reach beyond humble tears"
Am I wrong or is this 8 syllables instead
of 7 for the 5-7-5? I just noticed this.
Do not mean to be a party pooper. Great poems
Lori!

Reviewed by evan horetsky
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Very beautiful set of haiku....
Excellent and much enjoyed
many loves
evan

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Oh my Lori these are so touching....excellent writing...
the best haikus I have read...so much feeling.....
floria

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Haiku has long been a favorite... and you've used the form with precision.

Reviewed on February 24, 2004
these were very lovely haiku's, Wonderfully written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
I love haiku. I love these for sure. Thank you for this offering, Lori. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Hi Lori,
They are all great!!!


Beautiful...

Trixie :)


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Lori, each is a story in itself,dynamic and deeply felt! All are superb!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
such an ensemble of haiku
good ku!

john+

Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Delightful haikus...enjoyed all six.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Dreams betray my heart, touched me the most but I enjoyed all six of them. Thanks for the sharing.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Lori this is so beautiful, such a pleasure to read. Some profound thoughts here.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Lori,

This is excellent my favorite
"Roses solitude
Hearts blossom in tragedy
Beauty reigns in pain "


Peggy

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Superb Haiku!
Have a happy day!
Lurve ya........Ron

Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Great Haiku's poems, Lori!

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
Your writing has taken on a whole new look since you've been back. Keep up the good work.


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