Teasing Rain (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 22, 2009

I love rain and I love the way you personified her within your verses, Cryssa. Thank you! Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on April 11, 2009

The image of rain drops smiling as they run giggling through the gutter is-- well, poetic. I an almost see them cavorting in their fun! I loved this, Cryssa.

Linda

Reviewed by Ahna C

Reviewed on April 8, 2009

What a coincidence! I'm sitting here still soaked from walking outside over a half an hour ago in the not so gentle rain, when I came across this poem! heehee... hopefully ours won't be followed by snow...The sky is black like midnight and its only 3:30!
I am so wonderfully pleased at your use of a Music Theory term! cadences...I think they are my favorite assignments to write! This was definitely a PAC (perfect authentic cadence)!!!!
Well done!
I love you and miss you on this rainy day!

Luv,
Ahna :~)

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on April 7, 2009

This is a delightful poem, Cryssa, a great fun way to handle the weather. We had the same type of event that ended up in 10 inches of spring snow--heavy and wet with run-off..........Jerry

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 6, 2009

enjoyable read ...

Reviewed by Swan Son

Reviewed on April 6, 2009

I love the picture you painted with your words -- just like yesterday when the rain turned to snow. Teasing -- that's what Mother Nature likes to do ... we only need to learn to laugh at her antics and enjoy whatever she provides. Susan Williams

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on April 6, 2009

Delightful poem, Cryssa!

Reviewed by Joy Marsh

Reviewed on April 6, 2009

I really enjoyed reading this. Wonderful writing!!
Joy

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 5, 2009

Great images in this poem. Hopefully, spring will soon arrive...M

Reviewed by Leslie Bond

Reviewed on April 5, 2009

I could smell the fresh morning spring air in this poem. Leslie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 5, 2009

Cryssa, here's hoping spring comes to you soon! Nice write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

Great offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

Delightful!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

This one has a certain cadence to it which I like. Love the rain and the snow too. Call me crazy, Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

If winter is hanging with the skin of his teeth...shouldn't we call a dentist?

Georg

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

Rain will do that to you. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Cryssa,Your writing is wonderful. This one is playful and fun to read. What a great poem!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

sounds just like here--winter is hanging on stubbornly!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Delightful writing, Cryssa! Enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Give my love to your family! :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

A lovely whimsical poem Cryssa! Perfect for Springs duality!

ET

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Cryssa...I love this teasingly sweet poem! I love rain...anytime...and when it turns into snowflakes it's even more gorgeous....but... then again...I live in Phoenix...where we rarely get rain...much less snowflakes... Today is windy here; however, the sun is beautiful and the day is nice and warm....Soon my friend..you shall be enjoying Spring!! hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

I'm trying to send you Spring warmth, Cryssa, but someone keeps sending us colder weather from the north! Goodness, many have been lulled to believing Spring is here, haven't they? Well penned, and I hope the sun shines for you soon! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.