My washer just flooded suds
All over the floor
Is that a knock I hear at
The door?
Darn! Somethings burning
In the kitchen I smell
Guess my chickens cooked
All to hell
Knee gave out on me
Just yesterday
I was chasing the dog
That had got away
I'm A Mess
Hair in curlers .. no
Make-up on
All get up and go's
Done got up and gone
Computers done crashed
Don't know what to do
Families all down with
That darned ole flu
The cats tryin to eat
The bird again
Lord, will this day
Ever end?
This is cute...am laughing here..no...ure not a mess...ure my wonderful friend...and i love reading what u write..keep them coming...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2003
The picture looks like three forths of the women I just met in Hendersonville, Tenn. They were in a McDonalds at ten am dressed just like this. Did you ever notice that every place you go in Tenn.is either up a hill or down a hill? My sister lives on a hill so it depends on the route you take.
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2003
I told you people would love this I t is so hilarious especially with that poor picture Hee heehee cant stop laughing at this one
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Just to prove I'm not all gloom and doom I will freely admit that I loved your poem :o)
Excellent ...
Nice Write ......... What a Response ...???
The Picture .... Nice ....
~Sanilnath
Very nice write Linda.
Glenna
Chrissie
~Nikki~
Never!
Good poem!
I loved this and the picture was perfect.
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cute, excellent write
William
"The get-up-and-go's done got up and gone"
Super!
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