In Your Eyes (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Ah, your heart is showing, Linda. This is beautiful!

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

When you write words such as these then how can one possibly think of you in any other way ?

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 24, 2004

Such passionate yearning wonderfully expressed. Thank you, Linda. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 23, 2004

Beautifully romantic!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2004

Linda, this is gorgeous poetry, so loving and sweet.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2004

Linda, this is brilliantly crafted..your emotive writes are so well structured..unlike many I have seen..

Reviewed by DIVINELY DOWANNA (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2004

I had to read this because I've written a similarly titled poem I must post here. Funny how we females tend to need validation from the men we love and want to be esteemed in their eyes, and rarely do we find those eyes that do. Well written piece!

D!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 22, 2004

beauty and sadness all in one Linda. This is great. I enjoyed reading it. love and cheers. G

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

((((( Linda )))))
Your love splashes like a big truck zooming through a puddle, and your words strike me with that love and leave me standing totally messed up, drenched to the bones, but I wouldn't mind if you saw me this way...because you know how to see what matters.
Besides, it's all your fault anyway.
:)
Awesome poem.
I pray for you to be seen as you are.
John

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

Beautiful toughts Linda!!

But I know it's not pissible in my case!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ricky Pelfrey

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

BEAUTIFUL. Somehow I see the woman who is loving and caring for her man but the last line seems to say it. Will he come home at all, will he come home and be a stranger to you. There is a hurt in that last line of cinderella fairy tale waking up.
Guess it is hard to explain what i am trying to say

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

Great write indeed Linda! I enjoyed this.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

Linda, as always, this is beautiful!

Jack

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

Romantic You,i.e. In Your (His) The Eye's Of (God) Is Your Man Of Your Dreams_

You Do Not Even Have To Believe It, Just Accept That Fact He Does Exist_

In This Physical World You Be With Him(Her) It Is BAD DREAM Simply Because Your Just Rewards Are Not In Of This Phyiscal World!!

Your True Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

I see I'm too late with my comments as everyone else has stolen what I wanted to say. Drat. The poem was lovely and the sentiment divine.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

A beautiful poem but the last line left me hopeful it wasn't so

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

standing ovation, linda; this is truly a magnificent write! thanks for sharing; enjoyed, enjoyed, and enjoyed again!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

(((linda)))

we all aspire to reach these lofty goals...and to reach the level of talent and caring you possess in your great big heart :)

*BRAVA, dear (((friend))), i join j. allen and ed in applause :)

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

You are a Queen of AD, Linda!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

Wonderful...(stands up and claps).....Linda, this was done with such emotion and passion, it is absolutely fantastic....
Allen