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Neptune's Revenge
by Annabel Sheila → (All Poetry by Annabel Sheila)
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Fantasy? Or will Neptune one day have his revenge?

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On the crest of a monstrous black wave,
Thick and pungent with nauseating sludge,
Neptune rode his magnificent ebony steed!
Coral shield gleaming, sword raised in fury,
Anger flashed in his emerald eyes,
His lips curled into an evil snarl!
Burning rage at their insolence,
Scorched their image into his soul!
For into his kingdom they had unleashed
A demon so powerful and destructive
Every creature he had pledged to protect
Cried out in anguish as they perished around him!
Human greed had been the catalyst!
The demise of his empire was on their hands!
He would make them pay!
On this darkest night, he would extract his revenge.
He would show them no mercy!
And the tsunami covered all of the land,
And the blight was eradicated!
 

© Annabel Sheila

 
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 Reviews of "Neptune's Revenge"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 31, 2010
I want to be miles away when this goes on. Great storytelling. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS FANTASTIC! A MOST IMPRESSIVE WORK...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
Lovely writng enjoyed very much..Hugss
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
Neptune does get a few now and then, but usually the innocent ones. Patrick
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
We are becoming a blight on this planet, and it seems every day now that the wrath of Mother Nature is getting worse. We just can't seem to learn.
Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
Oh yes! I love this Annabel...Mother Earth will take so much abuse, but when She is threatened it will come bak to the perpetrators ten fold! Likewise for the King of the oceans!
Warm regards,
David
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
Very full of passion, and images this one!
There is a nasty storm moving into my town as I write this, and your poem has gotten me in the mood ~
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
Sounds historical, but can certainly fit the climate of present times as well in some instances. I like and enjoy your style of writing.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
...you took me right into this Anna....great visuals and emotions!!!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
Dark, stark and visionary; certainly worthy of pause for thought, Annabel. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
yes and could almost see a movie in this...for it would be so deserved but sadly the innocent would pay while the guilty would be off somewhere to play...
fee
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
Sounds like upgraded, First Testament prophecy...Well stated, scary, but so truthful words, Annabel.
Your friend, Mark
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