Somalia has plunged itself in a clan-based war which wreaked devastating havoc upon its country and people.
In the 40’s her father was a freedom fighter
She had lost him in the war with the Italians
At early age though, she married to a soldier
He has been killed in Somali-Ethiopian war
She had become a single parent raising children
When the dispute with the Ethiopians was solved
Somalia went to a clan-based war with itself
Armed struggle against the regime had started
Her elder son was murdered in a factional war
In the horrible fire fight with the US Rangers
She had buried two more of her male children
She is old now and desperately ill and helpless
Thinking of what War had done to her family
In Mogadishu she lives with her young daughter
Who herself is raising a child born out of rape
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Reviews of "A Sad War Story"
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2014
Thank you Grey for expessong interest in my poem. please Go on with your plans and let me know when it is published. Abdi-Noor
Reviewed by Adam Issa (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2007
Hi Abdinur salaan sare
I ended up reading your poems.
you are really amazing auther and poem
your stories going through my heart.
keep pointing the right path to your nation.
god bless you brother.
Mahadsanid
The utter pathos of this type situation, played over and ovr throughout eons, makes us wonder when does humanity begin to learn?
All we can do Abdi Noor is stay steadfast in prayer. Even when it seems hopeless, we must nevr forget Creator hears and sees our hearts. Our faith is constantly tried!God bless you all!
All stories from war are sad; no one is the winner. You pen the pain and heartbreak powerfully; maybe one day (hopefully soon) mankind will head your words and act responsibly. That is my prayer for you, your family, your Nation--peace, beautiful peace.
Abdi-Noor, how does the heart bear this much sadness and tragedy? Thank goodness for voices such as yours that capture the human sorrow and spread it to the world. Well done.
Oh Abdi-Noor, you capture the tragic story of those multitudes whose lives are circumscribed by profound loss in every possible way. One wonders when the world rise to the challenge of pro-active humanity, instead of manufacturing useless wars of greed... We truly do choose to do it to ourselves, don't we, Poet?
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Abdi Noor, you open our eyes to Somalia's grief. Somalia has become a constant in my prayers. I would have never known her without you and Safi opening my eyes and introducing us.
Susan
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2006
Terrible the ways of man, who cannot do anything but evil. May God Almighty have pity of our souls, for we deserve nothing but chastisement. Victor
This is so sad and almost unbearable to read but I cannot close my eyes to realities horrors so I still pray. Brother Abdi-Noor stay strong and stay safe. Peace, love,and blessings are wished for you and yours. "NAMASKA, the God in us salutes and honors the God in you." <Mikii-N-Baba>
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I ended up reading your poems.
you are really amazing auther and poem
your stories going through my heart.
keep pointing the right path to your nation.
god bless you brother.
Mahadsanid
Indeed war is sad my friend. For the soldier it sometimes ends at death but for the families it goes on forever.
All we can do Abdi Noor is stay steadfast in prayer. Even when it seems hopeless, we must nevr forget Creator hears and sees our hearts. Our faith is constantly tried!God bless you all!
Eileen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend/sister in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears! <
All stories from war are sad; no one is the winner. You pen the pain and heartbreak powerfully; maybe one day (hopefully soon) mankind will head your words and act responsibly. That is my prayer for you, your family, your Nation--peace, beautiful peace.
(((HUGS))), love and prayer *stay safe*, Karla.
Peace. Joyce
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
Susan