Great poem Stan-you have described a typical day in October in a very beautiful,creative way.
I especially like these lines: A car alarm is sounding
all, the trees shudder
All life has a bounce today.
Continued success
Barbara J. Henry
Enjoyed this my friend, it is sunny here in the southeastern mountains of Kentucky as well, beautiful blue sky! Your write is warm and heartfelt, it's always a pleasure to stop by your den.
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
i love the simplistic languidness of this; the observational of the reality with the surreality. .. . the machine with the world contrast. .. i jsut cant tell if all the world is recoiling from that alarm or in synch?
i love the way you feel with your eyes and see with your heart~
ness
Here in Brandon the same scenario takes place. When I come home I can hear the children heading for a late afternoon swim. Don't ya just love it!!!
Susan
I just returned from five sunny October days in West Virginia and it was very sunny...90 to 95 degrees, four of the five days...but it was nice...Good work on the write.
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
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I especially like these lines: A car alarm is sounding
all, the trees shudder
All life has a bounce today.
Continued success
Barbara J. Henry
bounce today - Stan, my friend, you have certainly found your voice in pen. I am so happy for you!! You just get better and better.
Myrna
Blessings,
Joyce B.
i love the way you feel with your eyes and see with your heart~
ness
ET
Susan
Thanks,
Dan
Walt