A Tragic Masterpiece (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

...AND THAT'S BECAUSE WHATEVER THE MASTER CREATED, WHEN IT BECOMES MARRED, HE CAN 'BREAK' AND MAKE OVER IT AGAIN...LIKE BRAND NEW. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2004

...as you should be of yours.
-James

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 28, 2004

"they remain forever guarded
by the Mona Lisa-like smile"
These are powerful verses. Thank you for this offering, Lori. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 28, 2004

a creative joy to read. G

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on February 27, 2004

Exquisite writing!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 27, 2004

Yes, the artist is always proud of his creations, and in their hearts they are all his masterpieces. Different every one but precious just the same. Loved the feel of this. Lisa

Reviewed by Lisa Cannons (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Love your work, this one is no different, going back in for another read!

Irish

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Superb write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

This is so good! Great line about" on the floor". More than just a poem!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Heartfelt masterpiece Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Oh wow! Lori, this truly is a masterpiece of expression and word selection as close to perfect as one can get.Kudo's!!!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Poignant and heartfelt, thank you.

Reviewed by Addie Williams Katie Fairchild

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

This was a wonderful poem. Makes me think, Thanks, Katie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Hi Lori
Superb as always

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

This was outstanding, beautifully written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

It is sad but lust is one thing and passion so much more. What will it take to learn?
Thank you for your poem. It is needed to shake lose a few heads and hearts.
Susan

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

I can only guess at the master's intent: self-preservation, pride, noble courage? Fine piece!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Excellent _

Remember Satan Devil Smiles (God) Laughs Last!

TRASK

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Oh Lori...how you touch my heart with your writing....such
profound words...so deep...such "hidden" messages that I
understand....how sad.....you are so talented...loved this sad
piece...floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Fantastic write!