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Oh Deer
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Our little band of deer at Coolwater has grown to about 10 now. They stop by at a predictable hour each morning.

Photo: Patrick Granfors


Poem Artwork

Surprise, Surprise

Big doe eyes

Staring back at me

 

Strolling across

My back yard

Behind a budding tree

 

I wonder where

Your journey

Will take the flock today

 

Your path is worn

Hoof prints adorn

The trail along the way

 

Every morning

You stop by

No telling where you’ve been

 

Nature’s timepiece

Just like a clock

You circle round again

 

Can’t imagine

A better way

For me to tell the time

 

Than my little flock

Of white tails

Graceful hour hands sublime

 

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright 2011 Patrick Granfors

 

 


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 Reviews of "Oh Deer"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on April 19, 2011
Oh! You're so lucky to have such awesome visitors, Patrick! Adorable write and picture....

Anna

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 19, 2011
so beautiful!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 18, 2011
An excellent write Patric
it's Nature's way to pay you back
for your appreciation of the wild
life that surrounds you
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed on April 16, 2011
I love deer; used to see them all the time in Ohio! (Haven't seen any here in Texas but maybe once or twice. Guess too much city busyness for them ... ) LOVE the pic and this delightful poem; well done, Patrick!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
Love this uplifting true-life reflection Patrick!
Have so much fun,
Christine

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
I recently learned that, for part of the 20th century, white tailed deer were wiped out in Ohio, but now have come back strong. There are also five times as many Whitetail deer in Wisconsin as there was when I was hunting them in the 1950s. I've always love watching deer and have had ample opportunity to review them in herds of up to 30 at a time. Your poem reminded me of their quiet beauty.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
Simply delightful, Patrick. "My" deer only number between two and four it seems and they are not at all punctual. Thanks for sharing. Much enjoyed. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
As I sit here in the middle of the city I am frankly envious......

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
Patrick, this is so neat. Haven't seen a deer up close in over 20 years since moving from Michigan. They are lovely creatures to all, except the farmers. (and maybe the truckers or anyone who has ever "accidentally" encountered one.) Nice photo too. She looks real curious.

Thanks Dick

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
I am blessed to see deer by my work place, and yesterday one decided to sit for a spell. That was cool. I saw a few on my way to work this morning. Nice way to start the day-
as is this poem.

John

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
White-tails are so marvelous to behold, and I wish your little flock the best.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
A beautiful way to keep time, Patrick. -gene.

Reviewed on April 14, 2011
Beautiful capture, thanks.

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
The gracefulness of deer amazes me. They are so beautiful! And you can teach them to trust you over time. Nice poem and good photo Patrick.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
Beautiful write about our beautiful spot. Now if those darn turkey buzzards would find somewhere other than our turret to roost. . .

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
Great write, Patrick. I can well relate to your friends as we have ours that do about the same thing everyday. Well done.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
like setting your watch to the german subway system...must be nice to witness those sorts of things up there. when i was on catalina island last summer i saw a big deer walking up the street at like 3AM. pretty cool, just the deer and i. won't see that in west LA, that's for sure.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
And if ever there is a food shortage you got it right in your back yard...venison is GOOOOOOOOD eatin'...e


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