The ice rose took shape and began to be born
. . . by the hand of the Master, with a delicate chisel shorn.
There would be time enough at its disposal
. . . for the whole of the world its passing to mourn.
To sparkle for a while and to live gloriously in the frigid sun,
. . . icicles form drop by drop and webs are by inch spun.
Exquisitely traced by the delicate hand of time with considerable cost,
. . . the world is at its feet; its eternity is encased in frost.
Formed by the seconds, minutes and hours that constitute time
. . . by overlays of intertwined rhythm and rhyme.
The picture of a world slowly began to take shape and come alive
. . . to live for a brief time, a world in a world, as it struggles to survive.
Acute angles and crusty crevices are fringed with the adornment
. . . of the ice chips that cluster together furry frost to make.
Let it rain or let it snow, the ice crystals already know
. . . what it means to come into existence and slowly grow
A white crystal rose is now being born
. . . it suddenly appears in winter’s wonderland to adorn.
Cold, calculating winter simply drains the red color in sips
. . . until the fragile rose has frosted flakes on its frozen lips.
Frozen in form and without the ability thru movement to speak,
. . . the beautiful creation has other means its fulfillment to seek.
Catch the miracle of its hallowed presence glow in moonlight
. . . before it disappears once again with the passing of the night.
The body traced by a halo
. . . emitting an aura of mysterious light.
Traced in silhouette against the surrounding darkness
. . . as though claiming full possession all through the night.
Puff and it is gone, vanished as if it were never there,
. . . like a cloud blown by wind or a sound-frightened hare,
What took endless hours of patient work to construct,
. . . vanished quietly into thin air in a matter of a second.
Melted by the warmth of the day’s sun,
. . . far sooner than anyone could rightly reckon.
The cold chill of admiration stakes its claim;
. . . The warmth of human touch would permit no blame.
To touch the frozen ice rose would disturb its tender balance
. . . between the cold breath of winter and the frosted silence.
Deep inside the rose, a crystal eye stared back at me.
. . . the eyes of nature never lie; I wondered what it could see.
I gazed in admiration before slipping into the eye of the rose
. . . and what did I find there but a loving repose.
Staring back at the lost face of the poet now feeling gone
. . . who is only willing to identify himself as a person named John.
No priest, sage or poet would he claim himself to be,
. . . only another one of God’s creatures like the bird or bee.
TO SURRENDER ONES SELF, EVEN IF ONLY FOR A MOMENT...TO THE POINT WHERE A PERSON BECOMES ONE WITH NATURE...WITH GOD...IS, INDEED, A PROFOUND BLESSING. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
the ice rose is a kind of paradox (the red, Fire, and the white, ice, water together) which is so normal in the realm of priests, sages, and poets -- all those who bring together the human souls and bodies, nothing to say of birds and bees. Cheers, alex
A lot of famous 'John's' down through history. My favorite being the Biblical Apostle/Prophet John. The natural processes referred to as the Master's delicate chisel has an afterglow that lingers in this readers mind. Enjoyed this. Peace... r
"frosted flakes on frozen lips." What can be said about a phrase like this. Unfortunately, it made me think of cereal… ;-)
Although you do move into a personal statement in the last four lines, I think you could do poetic justice to a frozen rose and have more impact by just a few lines rather than this epic output of sometimes, repetition.
I'd say you "rose" to the top on this one. A few years back, I planted a rose under our bay window. There, protected from the elements, I've seen it have blooms in Dec.
To humble oneself in the manner which you have used is admirable. To see all you have seen in this "Ice Rose" is a surely a gift given to you, a lover of nature. Beautiful!
What a cool poem by the "person named John." You defined the "Ice Rose" in such a way as I doubt any other poet has throughout the centuries. Well done Sir.
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Although you do move into a personal statement in the last four lines, I think you could do poetic justice to a frozen rose and have more impact by just a few lines rather than this epic output of sometimes, repetition.
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