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God's Finger
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Sandled feet walk amid the burgeoning clouds
The breeze as He passes causes them to rise
He's angry today, everyone will know it
He will pass judgement from His throne in the skies

A lowly man is caught out in the open
He is searching for shelter against the rain
Darkening clouds part and God's finger points down
The man becomes part of an electric chain

The wind screams out another name on the list
Frantic cries of mercy give voice to the storm
God thunders His verdict upon the poor soul
Who is forced to surrender his living form

God reaches down and snatches up a city
Everyone is affected by His wrath
There's no need for warning, He already warned
God comes in the storm, on a lightning bolt's path
~~
(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "God's Finger"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on June 9, 2004
Powerful and Scary too Karla.
You should put up a warning for children
about reading this! I know I got a bad feeling!
Good poem in form though!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 9, 2004
Excellent write Karla!!

Powerful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2004
And he aims at me:))

Great message here.

Nice one beaut...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2004
Fantastic write with such a strong voice!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 8, 2004
Karla, fantastic write!Love the message in this
awesome poem!Brava!

Reviewed on June 8, 2004
Amazing as always
God BLess
Michelle~

Reviewed on June 8, 2004
interesting thought about wht God can do.. very interesting
Tommy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 8, 2004
God reaches down and snatches up a city

Gave me shivers, Karla. That's how I envision the end of this wicked world.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 8, 2004
Cool write. I especially like the final stanza.

Reviewed on June 8, 2004
(((Karla)))

WOW!! This one blew me away; what a powerful poem that perfectly captures His ability to create stormy skies and the powers within! AWESOME imagery and setup; BRAVA, dear poet! You shine on these stormy writes; keep them coming!! You are getting better and better; your talent is amazing!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D


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