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Senryu Chain (5/7/5): Determination
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Yawning and stretching,
the fingers of dawn pry the
windows of my eyes

open, announcing
the arrival of a new
day of promises.

It's too damned early;
I was out late last night and
haven't recovered ...

so dawn pokes my eyes
with determination and
makes me see the light.

No lazing about
in bed;  SHE woke up
before anyone.

My being lazy
isn't going to stop her
from making her rounds.

I was on her list.
She completed her job and
performed it quite well;

onto the next time
zone in her scheduled duty:
her work, here, is done.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Senryu Chain (5/7/5): Determination"
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
Excellent offering Karla, made me smile!
you always do these so well...

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Nicely done, Karla. Merci. Amour et paix.

Regis

Reviewed on August 19, 2005
(((Karla)))

Love the beauty and also the humor in this; clever and very well done write! BRAVA, Poet!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

The pic is stunning!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
Very well written chain!!

Stunning pic!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
Too right, Karla... "she who must be obeyed", eh, like it or lump it! Beautiful though, ain't she? And I love her in her stunning all-bright summmer radiance, rather than her wintry slothfulness, like an old hag with a hangover! This is an acute and very clever anthropomorphism (is it? Not sure, but sounds good! :)) She has the age-old torture trick - bright light in the eyes. Shame some of us are allergic... Love this clever ray of sunshine! Woke me up! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Try living where the midnight sun is! Ahhhhhhhhh She has trouble sleeping at all!

Very clever write.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
This is a great chain, Karla. I am one of those "too happy" morning people that so many would love to evict from the planet.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
"Early to bed
Early to rise
Makes a man
Happy, healthy and wise .... and insufferably boring."

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Be So Determined ThatYou Humanity Never Get Caught With Your Pants Down_

On In to The Next Time Zone....

Your friend, TRASK

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Determination. I could use more of that. Wish I were Dawn. Great job, Karla. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Excellent grouping Karla...beautifully said!

Eileen
(still praying;-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Sometimes the art of living and having to perform for the meager wage we usually receive is enough to make a person pull the covers over their head and just say, the hell with it. But then reality cimes creeping about and the covers are flug off and the routine begins all over. But, as they say, the alternative is not all that great either. Good poem.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Cleverly and nicely done..

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Wonderful as always you are a joy to read.

Felix


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