poets write for peace and see it exploding right in their faces; brothers embrace brothers, then stab them in the back the first chance they get; disasters plague the earth and i don't want to be around when it disappears in a massive ball of fire ...
scratch my existance out of the sands of time, and throw me across the ocean of stars - i want to be where God is, above the madness - because Lord knows mama tried.
(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
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Reviews of "Mama Tried"
Reviewed by sarah playle (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2005
A good look at the world as it is today. Sad, but true.
Ahhh but don't you think God wants us to be where he needs us the most, soldiers to protect the innocents, priests to pray for lost souls, teachers to teach children, and we.....we poets to let our insights and dreams spread the word that the world can be changed.
This is excellent work, Karla but because we each are part of the whole, we are each responsible for the madness that exists. I am certain that each of us could do more to make changes, but the situation is so overwhelming that we see the problem but develope no viable solution. We have reached a time in our society where we have all stooped to finger pointing. Once we point a finger three times at others it is time to realize that we should be pointing at our self. Changing the world will happen one responsible individual at a time and we will teach by example. For some reason, a feeling of futility seems to be the order of the day and of the masses.
Take care,
Sherry
whoa, Nellie... this take-me-outta-this-world-God attitude must be catchin', Karla. you really captured the feeling, which I know well of late, of wanting to be moved and removed. very strong poem. so, on second thought giddy up and go girl! Dawn
There's a song in this! Indeed a lot of evil is going on in our world today, and the media hypes a lot of it. There are as many positive things embracing our world as negative things. Many of the positive jewels are in the form of education, religious endeavors, and the arts. These wondrous things also make the headlines, but you have to change your view to see the UNbold print. Only negative headlines make the bold. Nice BOLD write, Karla!
Sage
Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2005
{{{{ Karla }}}}}
Deep write, and sooo TRUE.... Thank you for sharing this..
~Nikki~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(
Felix
Love Tinka
yet Hope can be the light that breaks through
the darkness. So keep that flame burning.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Take care,
Sherry
mood spot on and as always a finely honed poem!
Love,
Eileen
but i sure hope God is not above the madness cuz he promised to be with us
john+
Sage
Deep write, and sooo TRUE.... Thank you for sharing this..