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Sand Pipers At Work
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Reminiscing about the cruise I took three years ago - has it been that long?? Think another is long overdue -

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman


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The ocean retreats, leaving
behind morsels of food for
them to feast on.  On spindly
legs, they rush in until the
next tidal wave comes in with
a roar, driving them back.  They
wait for the next reversal
of fortune:  the eternal
struggle between survival
and escape.  An endless war -

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (3/1)

   

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 Reviews of "Sand Pipers At Work"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Wouldn't it be fun to have a poetry/writing retreat for a cruise?

food for thought... hee, hee... sorry, still thinking of your last poem I read about food.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 3, 2008
I love chasing them little birdies on the beach, but they are so fast...Rufuz

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on March 3, 2008
I love sandpipers. They remind me of me and my brothers when we were kids, chasing and running from the waves...

Rebecca

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
They sure burn up a lot or energy for their daily bread, don't they? But then, flying probably takes even more.

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
you visual write takes me there--well expressed

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Plumb. I saw this in motion over the last week. You have captured it perfectly....

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Love watching the sand pipers on the beach, they always put on a good show...lovely poem
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Love your slice of a sand piper's life, and I love that pic. The pic takes me back to one of my favorite times in life -- out at sea in the Navy. When I was off-duty, I could be found up on deck, either back on the fantail musing with Mother Ocean in all of her deep-sea moods, or up in the bow when She was stormy. There is nothing like the feel of gripping the bow as a big ship crashes through Her stormy tirades! Speaking of sand-pipers, you gotta love the way they glide in and touch down for a quick running food-grab between waves, especially just before full low tide.

BTW, concerning what Karen mentioned: An Alaska cruise right now will gift you (both) with the massive array of ice-bergs which are spawning from the Arctic melt-down. Simply awesome, and a bit heart-breaking at the same time. Do it now before this is history. Several weeks ago, on NPR, Arctic scientists were saying that the average depth of the Arctic ice-cap is now reduced to only three feet. It is going away. Fjords are jammed with twice as many ice-bergs as this time last year. It would be a mistake to wait until next year to take that cruise. I wish I could go, too.

Ted

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
...you have penned...life...very well here Karla...
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
lovely poem and mind meandering Karla! Hope you can take that desired cruise, wish I could!;-)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Yes, by the shadows with a cold Coors letting the eyes to wander over the seas, far away, to where boredom can't reach.

Georg

Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Been that long already since your cruise?? My, how time does fly by! Me thinks you're due for another one--way past due! (Only this time, DON'T leave me behind!! LOL) Let's say if we get an unexpected windfall, we take a cruise to Alaska! Sound good?? It does to meeeeeeee!~ LOL Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Lovely! Must have been a good time if the memories linger that vividly. I think we're going next spring... ahhhhhhhhhhh sunshine, sand and ocean................
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
I love watching them dance to the waves looking for food,, Excellent Karla !

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Reminds me of Sable Island...The sea birds dance on the shore to the tempo of the waves...Gerard

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
An endless war, called Life. And those wondrous sandpipers you write of, are truly a marvelous part of it all.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Just like human life . . . Struggling toward the end . . . Classic . . .

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
AD is blessed to have sweet karla writing for us..
YF Ron
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