Why'd She Come In Here, Lookin' Like That? (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Wonderfully crafted poem. Your friend and brother abdi-noor

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

One of your best, Karla. Love it!
Sheila

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on July 24, 2008

Wow, great personification, great poem, dramatic

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on July 24, 2008

Beautiful representation of Dolly!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 23, 2008

Hey, how do you think you would look if you had to deal with all that wind blowin' your hair and such...how rude humans can be...LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 23, 2008

Why'd she come in here, lookin' like that? so our men could die peacefully, just the way they desire Karla. A great write dear. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on July 23, 2008

OOOOOWEEE That could've been death by bazombas, how most men wanna die! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 23, 2008

I love it and the symbolism captured. Lets hope Dolly is as benevolent and smiling as the real Dolly.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on July 23, 2008

We had a violent thunder storm last night at 2:30 a.m. Was kind of scared but watched it out bed room window. Could not sleep til it was over. Storms to be expected throughout today. We need the rain though. Hope you stay safe in Texas and don't get drowned out or washed out of your home. They say it is to be much heavier rains than needed down there in parts of Texas. It is just the beginning of the hurricane season, so take care throughout. Worried about you, let us know you are safe.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 23, 2008

Clever write, Karla; pray that Dolly won't be a demon!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 23, 2008

WOW! ! ! you nailed it nicely, optimism, euphoria, sensuality, everything in a few words saying everything! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 23, 2008

Karla,

Love the metaphors. Sort of a black widow I would say. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on July 22, 2008

...good good stuff here Karla...images...given personality...something you are so good at.
excellent...
John

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 22, 2008

Karla, great use of metaphors, and a powerful picture you've painted in my minds eye, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on July 22, 2008

Holy Cow! what's gotten into you, Girl? This is great stuff!==really great. --charlie