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Remember Me
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I will. I do. Today and every day. Got your back. Thank you ...

Image of sunset, (c) 2010, Karla Dorman.


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Why not me, a little boy playing
at the game of war?  Like a
thousand times before, I got up:
if I didn't like the way I died or
was wounded, there was always
a do-over, right?

Why not me, finding myself
hurting and dying for real, lying
on a broken field that isn't
nearly as red as me?  No fear?
Tell me that as I call out to
Mommy to stop the pain.

Why not me, resting in the arms
of medics as they battle to save
my life?  Hopefully, there will be
something left to save.  Won't
know until I wake up, that is, if
I wake up --- Mommy ---

Why not me, as I lie in a flag-
draped coffin, coming home for
the final salute, seeing the tears
on the faces of those I love?  War
sucks.  Why not me?  I did it so
it wouldn't have to be you.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (5/29)

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 Reviews of "Remember Me"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 7, 2010
Karla, this is a gripping work my friend -- the emotions just pour forth unabated -- may peace and love be always with you -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 31, 2010
very nicely done

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on May 30, 2010
well penned and touching

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 30, 2010
"...War sucks!..." you said, but not to Halliburton & Texas cronies, cos, a soldier still fall for every barrel of oil...

Georg


Reviewed on May 29, 2010
Beautiful memorial tribute, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 29, 2010
Great memorial.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 29, 2010
Remembering.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 29, 2010
ALWAYS I do remember...ed

Reviewed by Dorothy Krusky
Reviewed on May 29, 2010
Karla, an excellent point of view from a soldier who gave his life for his fellow countrymen. We often don't see or realize that soldiers are people just like us with real human faces and real human lifes and yes, they do question. Thank you for reminding us of the humanity of a soldier! Great write.

Reviewed on May 29, 2010
No words; just drop-jawed! WOW!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *Tears!*

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on May 29, 2010
Stunning.


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