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Rain Drops
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"Rain Drops"

By Amber "V" Moonstone
March 16, 2009

Soil once fertile, now frozen,
loneliness remains ever present,
while rain falls slowly down.

Sunshine washed away
as the rain pours downward
filling me with sadness.

Raindrops heard on window panes
reminding me of endless nights,
spent waiting by the doorway.

You were always late,
silently slipping into the shadows
carelessly ignoring my need for you.

Tenderness washed away
as each raindrop pitters and patters
within the echoes of my mind.

Your need for outside pleasure
drove your spirit toward forbidden fruit,
while the rain flooded my heart.

Now after many years of emptiness
You find yourself wondering why,
I have paddled upstream leaving you,

alone to hear unsettling raindrops
dripping agonizing acid of lost
teardrops flowing over your guilty heart.

Once again, the rain falls,
but this time, leaving me with cleansing
drops of renewal and rebirth.

Paddling toward a brighter day,
finding refuge in solitude and happiness
knowing that life does rain drops of


Golden Sunshine!

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Rain Drops"
Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on March 27, 2009
Beautifully done. The weather's effect upon our minds neve fails to amaze me.

Ed

Reviewed on March 20, 2009

Beautiful write of hope and renewing through
"Rain Drops."

Thank you for sharing have a wonderful day,
Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Swan Son
Reviewed on March 17, 2009
An sad story ... but not written in a boring way. You tell of your hurt simply and then reward the reader with golden sunshine at the end. thanks. Susan Williams

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 16, 2009
An outstanding write Amber
You writes are always well penned
And dilivered from Your heart and soul
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed on March 16, 2009
Splendid job, dear Amber.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 16, 2009
Sometimes, rain drops clapping on your shoulders are the hands of the Great Spirit telling you to love the life drops falling because after them will come His shinning smile with the sun.

Georg


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 16, 2009
Truly enjoyed and emphazized with this one Amber, the teardrops and raindrops are such a great metaphor...sometimes raindrops are warm, soft, and even comforting...other times cold, hard and unforgiving. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 16, 2009
Amber, I love the full circle of this poem...the sun will come out tomorrow.
Love and Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2009
Beautiful writing as always sweet lady..stay safe and well...Hugsssssss

Reviewed on March 16, 2009
Gorgeous, Amber in image and imaged lines - the many moods of raindrops - wish I'd written this one! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 16, 2009
HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF YOUR BEST POEMS!!!!!!!!!! VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on March 15, 2009
Amber:

Wonderful poem with an uplifting message at the end. Well-done!!!

Sandie Angel :o)


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