Now for something weird and different... ...I think it was inspired by Lewis Carroll's "Jabberwocky."
Bratster Bleakstrom's Vigil
It's a bratsterly day in the flabberwoods
And the guirdioles are flinging in the tweels
The sighs are blue and white above the greever
Floathing swisherly like to the farrier ospean
The Gleegirl Queen is in obstential respose from this domerain
And the eerier's faeel is out of sequential forade
It echoes depthly in sorrowing abounding solstice
It shall be so until she returns to this lairiade of flux
So starkly dark are the blammerchops emerging
From depths of earlier miets and caleps of unknown
Oh friendsome bratser thou canst stop the brooming slide
Slither from the hilliwick it will and swallow all the here
And now until the Gleegirl Queen returns to take her shrone
We must imbade and givilantly be the peekers of this gladezone.
When I read this poem it seems like I am reading a foreign language. A lot of the words are unfamiliar to me, ones I've never heard of before, and when I look them up in the dictionary online no such words exist. Is there something that I am missing here perhaps.
Respose, bratsterly, imbade, bratser, givilantly, domerian are just some of the words that I've never heard of before and the dictionary doesn't find...
Because of all this I don't really understand this poem and what it is about.
Weirdly creative. I love the word blammerchops. I was in the supermarket on Sunday and had to endure two bratsters screaming at their flabberwood mum. Patrick
And so when the Gleegirl Queen returneth she will interpreth these lines for those of us who spaketh not a word of Jabberwocky. LOL.
Nice flow Reg, and a wonderful follow through. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
les moulins a`vent de votre esprit...writing from behind,
a tree...Wish my french was good enough to tell you more...
Lady Vivian visiting from her forest glen.
Exploring new strata of language:) It starts off playfully, but soon travels into a nostalgic melancholia, ending in a note that evokes the sensation of sadness. It is remarkable that an abstract poem can produce clearly recognisable moods.
Your kids must get a real kick out of reading this! You've created an enchanting fairytale with your Dr Seuss-like language and wild imagination. Great work!
WELL...ALL I CAN SAY IS...I REALLY WISH THE QUEEN WOULD GO BACK TO BRATSTER...SO HE CAN STOP KICKING UP A FIT AND CAUSING A WHOLE LOT OF DAMAGE(I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M TALING ABOUT!...SO THERE!)I AM ALMOST HYSTERICAL AS THIS MOMENT...THANKS FOR SHARING REGIS AND BLESSINGS. LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS.
My mind has been a blank lately when it comes to writing. I am impressed with your magical and witty words. Very good Regis. May God bless you every day of your life.
What a vigil it will be! When the Queen is away, who knows what will go on in this dark forest? A fun read, opens the imagination...I won't look out of the window tonight -- dark storm brewing for real...
HAHA, love the nonsensical idea. You could write anything and still get the same ole reviews, bar those who read the poem. On one site, they questioned its members. Under 20% read the poems in full.
This sonnet makes me relate more to Tolkien than Lewis. It his kinda Hobbit feel song feel, when Bilbo is in the forest.
A Wizard of words, oh Regis one. I am immediately thinking of all those best-selling novels of bullshit about deep forest goings-on in the night. Gets me right in the gonites.
Hello Regis, I must say different indeed. Interesting write though I cannot say I understand it at all. I guess I am just not that well versed in vocabulary extravagansa.(he,he) Love and Light. Karen
And so it was in the days of old many a jabberstory was told, you must have listened well Regie, not that I know what you said, I have a hard enough time with anglais, but it sounds interesting, almost otherworldly, you and Sha Tara didn't meet up with them from you know where. Bless ya! Jasmin Horst
I definitely see the influence of Carroll. This is creatively sublime! Love your language and this imaginative world. Always a pleasure to read you, Regis. Love and hugs, Elizabeth
It is like trying to understand a Scottsman with a very thick brogue. If I could comprehend it, I could probably review it but, truly, I am at a loss to even a gist of what you write, Reg. Simple minded am I or at least that is how it seems at the moment.
Take care,
Sherry
"blammerchops"! That is too far out and cool. You are one creative writer Regis. I would not know how or where to begin a project like this. But "blammerchops" is someone I think I used to know. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2011
freestyle creative brilliance!! i could never do anything like this, superb talent regis, superb!
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Respose, bratsterly, imbade, bratser, givilantly, domerian are just some of the words that I've never heard of before and the dictionary doesn't find...
Because of all this I don't really understand this poem and what it is about.
Love ya!
Jane
Fabulous!
But I tip my hat to a master wordsmith.
~W~
Nice flow Reg, and a wonderful follow through. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Sheila
a tree...Wish my french was good enough to tell you more...
Lady Vivian visiting from her forest glen.
And I certain he would say as I do that I like this mutcherly!
-gene.
Peace,
Dayvid
Best to you & yours
Dee
Much success-
Barbara J. Henry
Daniel
Peace
Tony
Chip Bergeron
Anna
bonne nuit, Regis
G.
This sonnet makes me relate more to Tolkien than Lewis. It his kinda Hobbit feel song feel, when Bilbo is in the forest.
Ron
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
God bless,
Lew
Blessings,
Christine
Take care,
Sherry
Congratulations, you made a new language!! Quite imaginative. A bit like Clockwork Orange.
Mary
Cheers,
Dan