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Grub's Up
by Chanti Niven → (All Poetry by Chanti Niven)
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A crazy 5 minute composition with a few twists. Excuse the irregular rhyme scheme...it's just the way it worked out. ;) Call it 'fowl' play.


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The caterpillar faces a highway
and considers what it will take to cross
She risks being squished
but won't be missed
so counts it as no loss

On the other side
A chicken waits with glee
Folk thought him dumb
but he's out in the sun (albeit on the run)
cuz he outwitted KFC

A chicken has his needs, but
'fast food' eventually arrives
Indeed my friends
through the dips and bends
his patience keeps him alive.

The grass is always greener...
'The grub must make her move'
but the road is far too treacherous
and she seems stuck inside a groove
The chicken watches frowning
as she spins a tight coccoon
inside she hides
dreams of a ride
and hopes it comes 'real soon'

The chicken is a determined creature
And since he has no fixed abode
Thinks perhaps he should fight
for what seems so right
And he's compelled to cross the road
 
Instead of a juicy morsel
he finds an empty case
He just cannot see
how it can be
for he's got egg all over his face.

Like all good chickens before him
he has a good scratch around
Hoping he'll find the evidence
somewhere upon the ground.

Way up high above him
the erstwhile caterpillar
catches a breeze and sings
Traffic is no longer a problem
for she's grown a pair of wings..
.

(Now you know why the chicken crossed the road.)

Copyright 2007 Chanti

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 Reviews of "Grub's Up"
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
fowl play LOL
I'm smiling ear to ear!
What a pict. to capture!
Your way with words are stunning!
your words inspire Chanti!
Warm Hugs and Love, WArmly WArrior "Purple Spirit" Sheee
STay POsitive!

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 18, 2007
no need to apologize for rhyme schemes my friend.
This is delightful!
A bit of humor and a bit of nature and a bit of philosophy all rolled into a whole. Splendid work!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on May 16, 2007
Gotta agree with you Kate...chickens ARE comical creatures. I love ascribing them human characteristics because they transform something that might be considered tragic into something humorous. I've written some of my funniest pieces during the worst times of my life. My sense of humour has always helped me through those tough times.
Thanks to all for commenting on this. I'm so happy it raised a few smiles.
Chanti

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
... and wings that came naturally, rather than angel-ones forced upon her by a gobbling preditor! :)) I adore chickens, but they always somehow make me laugh, comedians that they are... Hope this one appreciated the yolk... LOL K xx

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 14, 2007
What a wonderful and delightful write my friend, you've brought a smile to my lips! Enjoyed this write...too cute!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on May 14, 2007
Cute write Snuggles...Thanks for the much-needed smiles today. :) :)

Your Cuddles

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2007
vEry cute. I liked this. Lady J

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Okay, got me laughing and your photograph is adorable. Good write.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
There is no end to your talents Chanti! Love, Michelle

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Survival of the fittest in a delightful tale.....

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Reeealy cute! I love nutty stories, and this are one. (yes, I did that on purpose.)
Very funny and well-done.

Connie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Hee, hee, I needed a laugh today..Thanks..

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
This is a hoot! A poem full of humor and very clever...I loved it!

Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Hilarious, Chanti'; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn (Kaz) in Texas. :D

Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Very, very clever Chanti. I thouroughly enjoyed it.

Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
very good and funny.
Terry

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Chanti...good on you, nice write.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Hahahaha...thanks Chanti.....my day just ended with a smile!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Crazy and fun. Love the picture of the chicken in mid air.

Ron

Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Chanti,

The answer to the question given in clever verse: well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Thanks for sharing the poetic humor, Chanti. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
That was so damn funny. I needed a laugh badly today. You need to submit this to...somewhere. Great write.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Very good tale! Lots of smiles in this one :) Nicky x


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