Fog enters a nature walk without invitation;
Creating a rhythmic step as a new sensation.
The fog creeps slowly along on tiptoes of dew,
Hushed in the after dawn, leaving behind no clue.
It appears out of nowhere like invading ghosts in the air,
Touching the tree trunks with fingers as in a prayer.
The dawn takes on the feel of a comforting cloister,
Untouched and pure as a pearl within an oyster.
The fog wraps all of nature in ethereal mist,
Mysterious and mystical, if you get my gist.
It meanders thru a labyrinth of passageways and lanes,
Like a ghost moving in slow motion wrapped in chains.
The fog moves like a coward in the open ground,
Then makes like a thief toward the ocean sound.
The bone white veil ebbs and flows like a restless tide,
We feel such movement deeply within us inside.
It wraps all of nature in its shroud of unholy dread,
Before settling down everywhere as a holy wonder instead.
Around the fog hovered a compelling sense of presence,
Giving the feeling of being watched in my very essence.
There is something about fog that arouses primeval instinct,
Ever wary and watchful as I walk through this eerie precinct.
I could feel a very old sorrow enter on the fog’s broom,
Reluctant at first then surrounding everything in its gloom.
Wisps and columns of fog rising out of the colossal trees,
As if on a spirit-journey, pausing in prayer on its knees.
The fog lifted me to a strange and intimate awareness,
Of an ancient past that does not yield itself to tenderness.
Phantom-filled fog inclined to play tricks on a malleable mind,
Harboring emotions and sacred sentiments of the human kind.
The fog now fragmented, floundering and breaking away,
On its way to the edge of the horizon without undue delay,
Following paths thru forest and glade a hundred years old,
Leaving behind in its wake thousands of years of being bold.
In wandering, if ever you encounter such a mystical specter,
Breathe deeply its primordial air as a sign that you respect her.
when we see the rolling wheel or smog rising upon the water or fog climbing down the hills. . . it's almost impossible to describe all this stuff. Here, slow but sure, you've succeeded, John. Cheers, alex
I live on a mountain overlooking the mighty Fraser River. Mighty it is but quite often in the fall, the fog forms and the river vanishes. I love your descriptions in this poem, John. Love and peace,
Regis
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 9, 2016
We are such visual characters that when fog impairs our vision we conjure up all kinds of altar images like you describe.
One thing that I learned from watching scientific shows is that much of the arid desert coast of the world gets its drinking water from the fog that routinely rolls in and blankets hardy vegetation with dew. A life-giving process in some of the most dry and deadly parts of the world.
Fog turns everything to a misty gray. A familiar landscape becomes quite alien, and you can lose your way in a heartbeat. But then the sun gathers strength, and burns the fog away.
Michael D.
I love it! The fog has always held mystery. Picture riding in a horse pulled carriage to "Castle Dracula"! Running, fleeing, getting lost in the fog............Oooooooo!!! The fog comes to take away.
Yes, I have known fog in just this way, too. I love her yet also respect her for I believe she is a closet cousin to Hawaii's Madame Pele: beautiful, seductive, and sometimes quite vindictive. Excellently, evocatively written!
Regis
One thing that I learned from watching scientific shows is that much of the arid desert coast of the world gets its drinking water from the fog that routinely rolls in and blankets hardy vegetation with dew. A life-giving process in some of the most dry and deadly parts of the world.
Ron
Michael D.
Love ya!
Jane