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As the Sun Goes Down
by John Herlihy → (All Poetry by John Herlihy)
Saturday, November 2, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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-- AS THE SUN GOES DOWN --

John Herlihy

 

With my thick legs dangling over the pier,

I watch the soft paintbrush of the sun go down.

The great flaming orb with only itself to steer,

Shooting rays of red and yellow, orange and brown.

 

The long, low sky rolls itself up in rainbow glory;

The carpet of earth below rolls onward with no escape.

Immense sky and rugged earth tell an unlikely story;

Unravelling at my feet, an image only God could make.

 

All the wispy clouds that fly, all the dusty roads that run,

All the threadbare hobos that across the land roam.

All the children across the land who cry and have fun,

On the horizon the light is falling, the wind does moan.

 

All the people who dream themselves into the immensity,

In a world that has run amuck and turned out all wrong.

All the children who love and laugh in their own propensity,

All the croaking frogs, grinding crickets, blend with birdsong.

 

Rest assured stars will soon be out twinkling in the night sky;

God who never slumbers wraps the world in a heavenly mantle.

The sickle of a moon ever falling, hanging by a thread on high,

As the breath of spirit blows across the plains in a wind gentle.

 

The drooping North Star will lay itself down beyond the prairie;

Coming night will bless the earth, darken rivers, fold in the shore.

Nobody knows what is going to happen, except the midnight fairy;

Who draws down the sun, turns off the lights, closes the barn door.

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(c) John Herlihy 30 March 2019


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 Reviews of "As the Sun Goes Down"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 8, 2019
I ENJOYED THE FANTASY MIX HERE...AS ONE SITS IN A RINGSIDE SEAT AND OBSERVES THE AWESOME BEAUTY OF THE SUN...AS IT DOES DOWN. THE IMAGERY AND RHYME SEQUENCE HERE IS GREAT! LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 3, 2019
The kind of poem that only a widely wandering wordsmith could write from the very heart of a personal, close perspective. I wish I could write with such whimsy, but my scientific upbringing tells me that the sun does not set by "going down." It is only the earth rotating like it has millions of years, allowing us to set our clocks accurately to it. And the beautiful sunset is always the result of the very thin atmosphere and weather conditions that refract the sun's light, creating those colors against the utter blackness of outer space. Stars do not, "come out." They are there all the time, just unseen in daylight, and they don't, "twinkle." That is again, the atmosphere of our earth refracting the stars' light, identical to the light from our sun only so much further away.

But science makes dull poetry. I'll take yours…

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 3, 2019
"All the threadbare hobos that across the land roam." . . . Also . . . "croaking frogs, grinding crickets, blend with birdsong."

THIS is one hell of a poem, my friend. I'm stumped for anything else to say.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on November 3, 2019
A lovely ode to the end of day. Enjoyed much!

Rebecca

Reviewed on November 2, 2019
Your thoughts, your wordology!Ahhhh!! "the midnight fairy"......she's an eager one, eh? Oh, yeah! That "midnight fairy;"! You've got to watch her! I so enjoyed this poem!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on November 2, 2019
As you so succinctly portray here, the end of a day is paradoxically the beginning of another. Such wonderful attention you've given to the many facets of sun's rise and set. Bravo.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on November 2, 2019
Wonderful details of our marvelous world outside the walls of home. This is where we belong, outside spending time with nature. After all, it's the natural thing to do. I plan a bit of time every day on the water. Your poem vividly explains why I do. Well done!

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 2, 2019
A fine way to say it's the end of the day.


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