Short, simple and very nicely said! Poetically correct! That's MUCH better than the political BS we hear from the swine. I'd rather read your poems all the time instead of listening to our politicians whine!
It is healthier to take the steps anyhow if one is able. If not, take a valium and take the lift or go to places that are on the street level floor. Change your doctors if you must and all other places that you need to go to. Cool write!! I have a fear of heights.
Yes, indeed. People, myself included, sometimes have that feeling of dread when stepping into an elevator, especially after seeing the movie Speed. Suggestion: end the last line of the poem with "instead".
John
A naďve councilman and a down-on-her-luck single mom try to save their county’s last stand of forest from greedy developers and a dysfunctional government.
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Love ya!
Jane
Ron
and hitch up your falling socks,
say to hell with it all,
no worry, I won't fall.
John