I know that you write for children(which is great by the way) but you can consider adding a bit more of "art" in your poems. The best thing about your poem is that it is very jolly in nature.A little more of deeper emotions and feelings in your poems will make it even better.I think that children need to be introduced to deep emotions like love,hate,compassion,vengeance at a young age.Anyway, your poem did lighten my mood a lot. Thanks!!!
PT is an up and coming field these days. All of us are getting older and we are set in our ways. It should be called "Legal Torture for Seniors and Sport Nuts!" Nobody really wants to do it but they have to because it helps get them out of a rut. LOL
The Wholly Book of Genesis is a humorous satire on the first book of the Old Testament where the Story of Creation, the building of Noah's Ark, Sodom and Gomorrah and the families of Abraham, Isaac and Jacob are thoroughly spoofed and broadsided.
Farctured Frazzled Folk Fables and Fairy Farces, Part II satirizes popular children's stories into adult-oriented renditions. FFFF &FF, Part II is also available in Amazon Kindle and Barnes and Noble e-book formats.
Farctured Frazzled Folk Fables and Fairy Farces, Part II satirizes popular children's stories into adult-oriented renditions. FFFF &FF, Part II is also available in Amazon Kindle and Barnes and Noble e-book formats.
Love ya!
Jane
Keep them laughing!…
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