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Into the Cold
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
Saturday, January 10, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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It seems like every year, when winter comes, it's harder for me to keep warm. Eventually, I won't be able to keep warm at all.

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 Into the Cold


The world is getting warmer,
but we are growing old,
from our fiery beginning,
execrably into the cold.

From the core of starry explosions,
our atomic essence ventured whole,
through eons of cold, cold space,
this essence drifted without a goal.

Only to enter the glow once more,
from gravity's mighty pull,
coalescing into the stuff of life,
the fiery birth of a planet's soul.

Into temperate zone of existence,
from which life can evolve,
each creature with its tolerance,
extremes it must resolve.

We are the survivors,
of those who faced the cold,
with warm blooded internal organs,
that made us, oh so, bold.

The only creatures wearing clothing,
we ventured far and wide.
Some living in the tropics, naked,
some living in the arctics, with hide.

But as the days grow shorter,
and time seems to speed up,
the years go by much faster,
and the cold creeps into our cup.

Warm memories of our past,
fill our daily thoughts,
we can't remember yesterday,
was it cold, or was it hot?

Our eyes grow dim of vision,
and our ears no longer hear,
the heat of passion dwindles,
and the chill begins to appear.

The rosy cheeks of childhood,
have become pallid, red and raw.
The winter's chill surrounds us,
as we wait for the spring thaw.

With each year it becomes harder,
to stay warm through the night.
We bundle up by the fire,
and talk about our plight.

But when all is said and done,
and our internal fire goes out,
we once more go into the cold,
for that, there is no doubt.

Copyright 2015 © Ronald W. Hull

1/8/15

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 Reviews of "Into the Cold"
Reviewed by MJL Evans
Reviewed on February 6, 2015
Very powerful images that do make me feel rather cold - wanting to curl up in front of fireplace! I did like the transitions from hot to cold they're very beautifully written and vivid.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 26, 2015
RONALD, I AM GLAD YOU USED THE TERM 'WE' 'CAUSE THERE IS NOTHING 'UNIQUE' ABOUT THE AGING PROCESS. YOU KNOW...THE SKIN GROWS THINNER, THE RICH WARM BLOOD IN VEINS CLOSE TO THE SKIN COOLS OFF QUICKLY AND THERE YA HAVE IT. MY DAUGHTER CAME TO VISIT ME THE OTHER DAY AND SHE COMPLAINED HOW HOT MY PLACE WAS...I HAD TO TURN DOWN THE HEAT. SO I AGREE WITH EVERYTHING EXCEPT THE LAST STANZA; WHEN MY INTERNAL FIRE GOES OUT 'MY BODY' WILL GROW COLD AND DECAY... BUT ME? ILL BE FREE! AND IM GOING TO FLY INTO EVERLASTING WARMTH AND PEACE... FOREVER!!! GREAT WORK HERE...LOVED IT AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on January 20, 2015
I agree with David, so many great comments. What can I say? I enjoyed your poem and can relate to it. The age I am now seemed "old" to a very young me. Now it seems young lol

hugs
Kathy

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2015
Enjoyed....my nose always gets cold when it is cold out but, the rest of my extremities stay warm. Winter and us getting older a great metaphor.

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 19, 2015
But as the days grow shorter,
and time seems to speed up,
the years go by much faster,
and the cold creeps into our cup.

Your verses express a universal and timeless theme, Ron; and I do appreciate the philosophical perspective that you have shared here. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by David Thompson
Reviewed on January 14, 2015
Goodness! Just look at all these reviews. What can I say to add to the appreciation and beauty of this piece that hasn't already been said by those before me. I, too, think this is one of your finest poems, Ron. After going back to read it a second time, I can see how it applies to my life all the more. Perhaps if I keep reading it time and again, I will conclude that you are speaking about me specifically. At any rate, I do love this poem, Ron. I just wish I could write like this. Stay warm.

David Lee Thompson

Reviewed on January 14, 2015
Ron, I love how you compare winter to getting older. I guess it's true, especially the last stanza, 'But when all is said and done, and our internal fire goes out, we once more go into the cold, for that there is not doubt.' Beautiful as usual. Mary

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on January 14, 2015
that's why i prefer the tropics! wonderful images and thoughts, my friend.

Reviewed by Su Williams
Reviewed on January 13, 2015
Nice Ronald! Makes me wish for Spring! Come on sunshine!!!

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on January 13, 2015
An absolutely brilliant poem on many levels...
Great writing....
Diana..

Reviewed on January 13, 2015
like your poem. Your imagery is excellent, very vivid.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 13, 2015
No doubt indeed. And your graphic reminds me of my recent frigid lake dip - yikes.

Reviewed by June Marshall
Reviewed on January 12, 2015
we try so hard to stay warm seeking to deny the cold of gone

Reviewed on January 11, 2015
I think this is one of your best poems Ron. You are quite a philosopher and I enjoy your thoughts so much.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on January 11, 2015
This is a fascinating poem on several different levels. There is much for one to think about in this write. Well done as always.
I like the cold. It can be below zero, and I sleep with my bedroom window open.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on January 11, 2015
~Ron~
The warmth of a fireplace blesses us beyond the chill.
Of age shiver cold can undo the finest snuggie!
Wonderful expressive pen!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed on January 11, 2015
It is a cold world. Stay warm and sometimes it takes everything you got to stay warm!

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
Very nice cold poem Ron. However, the world is NOT getting warmer. We know that for a fact. Move to Florida or Southern California or to the Hawaiian Islands if you can afford that. Amen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
What can you do, Ron...as we live in a weather zone that see's all four seasons...gotta live with it, I guess...When I first started taking Cumaden (blood thinners) I got cold VERY easily and thought to be my lot in life, but as its been a year since I started taking the pills, I am able to, AGAIN, actually enjoy the winter so far and we have had some killer temps, that is all about to change with temps more seasonal on the way...I walked on the beach today in temps at 12 degrees and wind out of the west, blowing out the tide in the ocean, no waves, smooth as glass...anyway, try to enjoy all ur winters that God allows us to keep...-e-

Reviewed by De Rose
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
Hi Ron, is that really you in the picture? A well-written poem.

How about....and the chill seems much to near... for 9 line 4?

Just a thought from an almost poet.

Dennis . Moneysaver Editing

Reviewed on January 10, 2015
I can relate although I, for some crazy reason, enjoy the cold weather. Of course I can't enjoy it as much as I used to between skiing and ice skating. I do still enjoy my beach walks in the winter. The grandkids want to leave before I do! This is one fabulous poem, Ron!!

Love ya,

Jane

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
Remarkable in your signature style!
I know just how you feel dearie :)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
How well I can relate to this. Good one Ron.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
Beneath the obvious here, there is the prophetic nature of the universe speaking its eternal essence. Well penned.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
You can bet your booties old people cannot deal with the cold nearly as well as the young. I have to bundle up even in forty degree weather and I remember when, even in my thirties, I used to laugh at old people all bundled up and I was walking around it t-shirt. Now I well understand how it was for them.

Reviewed by Lark Pogue
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
Excellent expression of growing old and dying. Each day and each year now brings thoughts of WHEN? HOW? And only surety is that it will be.


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