it does not compute (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

Excellent poem and the Berg's would be pleased to see
so much support coming out for their son.
Thank you for sharing!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

A very powerful write...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

What a powerful write! You are right on the money!

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

this again shows two wrongs never make it right.
Many more shall suffer until mankind decides that value of a human life.
My thought are to his family while I have other thoughts to those who wear and hide behind hoods..
thank you for this one here
Again the stength of AMERICA will be tested
Tommy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

He did nothing to deserve this horrible, horrible death, Karla; but I agree with several of the others, things will sadly only get worse now, for many many other innocent victims of man's inhumanity to man.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

Karla,

Powerful piece - thanks for sharing this one!

Robert

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

I feel the frustration, and your question is so valid!
He did nothing to deserve it, and yet in their minds
all of us, especially in America deserve it! It will
only get worse, Karla. Be prepared! Excellent write!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

He was an innocent man and beyond that nothing he could have possibly done would have allowed for such brutality.

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

Good expression of your feelings Karla...it's so sad, all of it!!! The war, the treatment of the prisoners, the death of Mr. Berg.
Good write!

Andrea

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

One horror to read Karla!!

God be with this family!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

Cowards, all of them, if they had guts they would take off their masks & hoods and show how strong they are in their beliefs...much like what the KKK did in this country...all who wear masks to cover up their crimes are cowards...excellent expression here, Karla...
Peace is the only Way, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

(((karla)))

i wonder myself; i hope these cowardly, yellowbellied bastards are happy with what they have done because as much as they may not like it, their turn's coming. they will pay for their evil ways! (unfortunately, we are also to blame, abusing the iraqi prisoners; we are just as guilty as they are; and those who have done this deserve to be punished as well!) horribly sad, heartbreaking write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

So bloody sad, but the writting was on the wall, once what our guys had done came known.
Talk about a world mess.
Makes you think the world would be better without man...