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Haiku: Rude Awakening
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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This happened the other morning. :)


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thunder disturbs
morning slumber
with wake up call

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Haiku: Rude Awakening"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 1, 2006
Sounds like my hubbies voice...always like thunder...and make you hop outa bed with a "Yes Sir" additude..lols!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
nicely done!

Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Karla,

Wonderful ku; you are so good at these! Keep them coming; very well done! Take a bow; you deserve it!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Love this , and leave it to Ed M. to try to improve upon it;-) hahaha
Wonderful ku Karla!

eT

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
I love thunder and lightning as you do Karla, especially the breathtaking sheet and forked lightning on a warm summer's night, which lights up the skies in spectacular design
Super Ku expresses the majesty and power of Mother Nature
I'm glad you and Karen have re-adjusted to the pace of your dish washing, and are now in the swim of things !!
I'm still praying for your Daddy's full recovery to full fitness !
Fabolous graphic
Love and Blessings

Peter

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
When I was a little girl my grandmother used to tell me that thunder was the angels bowling.

This is a finely crafted slice of life. Well done.

Sweet dreams, Karla

Bobbi

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
... but at least, I hope, not in the shape of a husband's fist slamming into you while you both sleep. After years of sharing a bed with a "violent sleeper", think a rumble of thunder sounds a lot more gentle! Hmmmm... still a "growl" rather than a "purr" though perhaps, right? Unless your cute little kitty was sleeping curled up right next to your face instead? Well, I can hope, can't I??!! :)) Did Thunder then send Lightning to shine the torch in your eyes to make sure the job got done?? Neat and succinct. Kate xx

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
I sleep right through, for the most part, any storm...although Rufuz does not and usually ends up in bed with me...Ed

Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Brrrrr. But, the picturer is great, as is the write!
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Yes, it woke me up at 3:30 a.m., if we didn't need the rain so very badly I think I may have been angry over my loss of sleep. We aren't suppose to have thunder and lightning in February..or January either as far as that goes but we did. It worries me how destructive the normal storm season may turn out to be this year. We've recently broken many weather records..I hope that won't be one of them.
The sun is shining and is suppose to for the next several days...the temps are climbing almost to 80 by mid-week...we best enjoy it while we can...it's just liable to be snowing next week!
Have a Good Day Karla!

Lisa

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Short and powerful...I love it!
:)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
There are far worse ways to be woken, Karla - Mother Nature was beckoning you!


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