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Septcouplet: Enough
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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too wet, too dry, too hot, too cold
too stormy, ongoing drought
it's either feast or famine
too much or not enough
a state of extremes
across the lone star state

bad weather years
increase the fear

don't know what it's freakin'
going to do from one
moment to the next
they say it won't go severe
until the next bulletin
warns us to take cover

you better hide
best stay inside

sometimes, you have four seasons
in one day - i've seen it
you think you're going to have
a nice spring day, the next
thing you know, a blue norther
comes in with severe thunderstorms

with hail and snow
nowhere to go

they don't believe in basements
around these parts
they say to get into a small, interior
room, put as many walls
between you and the storm
and then your place blows away

it's off to oz
without a pause

tornadoes ravage the land
hurricanes floods
d  i  s  a  s  t  e  r
upon disaster
at least there are no tsunamis
or earthquakes ... i don't think

that's all we'd need
eNOUGH, we plead

and now texas is burning up
fires color the sky in flaming red
makes for brilliant sunsets
but tell that to the ones who've
lost everything
to go look at the sun

when will it end
don't comprehend

is god mad at us
not just us but the U. S.
and the world in general
war in the land and in the heavens
the sky is ripped asunder
and the ground shakes underfoot

god i'm so scared
please hear my prayer

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

 

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 Reviews of "Septcouplet: Enough"
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2006
The tribulation of mother nature penned so beautifuly...!!!

love joanne

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 15, 2006
Fear is one emotion that can be a creative motivator; certainly your verses provoke thought, Karla. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 15, 2006
Excellent septcouplet, Karla...sorry about the no basements in your area, maybe you need to build one of those 30's tornado shelters in the ground...stay safe girl
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2006
Wonderful septcouplet, Karla, you seem to take to this form pretty darn good. Thanks for trying it out every so often. Yep, I was just talking to Dottering Dottie (said lovingly) not thirty minutes ago that the world's weather is gone nuts. Now this from you. Good.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 15, 2006
is god mad at us
not just us but the U. S.
and the world in general

It often seems that way to me, Karla. Our prayers are with you.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
Nature has a way to make us hear her voice.

Reviewed on March 14, 2006
Excellent Septcouplet. May your prayers be answered. I too pray with you on this matter

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
weather is a reflective condition of the collective consciousness ... the world is in turmoil and so is its weather ... we just have to appreciate those moments of calm and peace and ohpe they have a lasting effect on nature's make-up ...


excellent poem! powerful images ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
Excellent write Karla!!

Take care okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on March 14, 2006
So sorry! We hope that the weather will get better soon. Sounds really awful!
Love and many hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
Oh, take a valium, will ya, you moved to Texas and now know full well what weather is expected each spring...I understand fear, but if you just could find how thoroughly exhillarating storms can be, maybe you and Nature could work something out from there...Ed

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
Stay safe you two. The Yellow Rose of Texas will bloom soon. Spring is near. Panhandle named for good reason. Pick a cast-iron skillet up by the handle in any season! Feel the Burn!

Sage

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
AWESOME!!! I feel the fear and the hairs upon my arms stand. I praise your work here. It is nature and it is human terror and anxiety for not knowing what the morning will bring.
God bless you all in Texas. You are in my prayers.
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed on March 14, 2006
Karla,

It is enough to frustrate even the most seasoned meteorologist or Texan. Scary state in which to live when the weather goes severe! Very well done, angst-filled write; brava! Love the picture; it perfectly compliments the poem! That last two stanzas are particularly effective!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
Karla
I heard North Texas is in utter flames with the bush fires, and that 10 people have perished in the inferno already....God Bless their souls....
It sounds like Texas is getting it in the neck these days !
You take care, my prayers go with you and Karen !
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
Excellent writing Karla. Do more of it to keep your mind busy!
Sometimes fear is a good thing if it makes us aware of something we need to be careful about. However, uncontrolled fear does not help in dire situations, but only makes them worse. We can't do our best thinking, at the very moment we need it most. So Karla, take control of your fear , and if you truly have faith, you'll let God handle the situation. Your fear can't change it anyway. Get your mind fixed on something else. There may be a lot worse to come and being able to stay in control is the key to making right choices.You both are in my thoughts and prayers!

Love,
Eileen


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