Haiku (5/7/5): Cotton Candy Skies (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 2, 2007

beautiful

love tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on October 2, 2007

I love a pink sunset with cloud cotton candy around it. Thanks for the analogy...Jerry

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on October 2, 2007

Oh, I've often though of clouds as cotton balls, but cotton candy - much more delectable.

Kathy

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 2, 2007

Last night, here in Connecticut, the sky looked like ribbon candy at sunset, all whispy and pink and lavender..I was writing a poem about it, and will post it later today.
Your poem is very lovely!
Peace, Love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on October 2, 2007

I can see the clouds forming on a cool, frosty day. Good write.

George

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

wonderful haiku-enjoyed!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

Excellent write, thank you for sharing and again congrats
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

YES!
Spun sugar skies....an awesome visual.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

...a taste of autumn's carnival...found in the skies.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

what a yummy breakfast,,

wtg Karla

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

A lovely "sky" haiku. I love those beautiful cotton clouds. Nice.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

SWEET! I love cotton candy! Sometimes I can look up at the sky and see it being spun! (that is...If I turn and turn,around and around and around!)LOL!
Yeah,yeah...I know I'm losing it!
But I'm glad I came across this one!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

And a delicious write as well Karla.

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

Pretty picture painted by these few words. Good job.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

I could just taste that morning! Good to read you again, Karla.

Carmen

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

Good morning to you Karla, beatiful...but now I'm hungry, love holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

Sure sounds like a perfect morning to me, wish I was there to share it, but then I suppose I can face some mornings like this in the sky above me. Thank you for sharing with us Karla.

Newfie Hugs coming your way, Rose

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

eating cheese cotton candy
falling down drunk
makes me tingle...
Haiku 4-U........LOL

Walt

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

Wonderful anology, Karla; very tasty write! Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

Delicious, Indeed!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 1, 2007

The ones over me just now are like sour cream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Georg